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on "turd to yo mutha" daywalker shittalker by Bachus
7 Nov 2002, 5:54 AM
This is shite.
I like Wesley's acting, you should see Passenger 57
Nice. But I don't get the Nirvana reference.
Nice
Short but very, very true, please can someone tell me why exactly she is great???My vote goes to Isembard Kingdom Brunnel because he made so much stuff
I'm sat in a library now. Books are very sensual things. Things are not as they appear to be.
I particularly like the contrast between the wholesomeness of bridge and baking and the wickedness of Ms Nin.
There once was a strange man called George
Who from nowhere could fashion a war
He won notoriety
And caused much hilarity
His words he was forced to disgorge.
And you started so well! Evil dictators should be tried by international tribunals, not stabbed in the eyes with forks. We should start with trying Bush for war crimes in Afghanistan.
I like the self-censorship of writing f*cking. What are you scared of?
Man City are indeed a mighty team, but not as mighty as the very mighty Stockport County.
Ezra would have been proud. The dirty fascist.
Nice. You combine the haiku with concrete poetry - the poem is jagged because of the lenght of the middle line.
Rubbish. 0. If your Dad "holves" you, it sounds as though he should be reported to the relevant authorities. Jesus, your poems' ratings are beginning to resemble binary code.
Brilliant, I needed a laugh and you completely satisfied my warped humour.Just the thought of a monkey with a flamethrower...
They say that you get the heroes you deserve.How sad for Britain that we apparently deserve a air-headed, emotionally incontinent clothes-horse. I would have voted for Shakespeare if I thought the exercise had any meaning. Which I don't.
You do love the word 'cup' don't you? Good luck in your search. I've given up mine for now, but I can see how you're drawn back.
Wonderful. I think a fork is the best we could hope for.
I can see the Odysseus thing - allt he sailing and beacon images. I think i would finish after 'again, safe', although 'throwing my ribs/ at her feet' is good'. Perhaps hold that over for a separate poem entirely? It find this last stanza difficult because i appreciate why you want those emotions there, and it does complicate your homecoming in an interesting way, but I think your expression is just too fevered.
Brilliant! This should be the goddam best poem! Its teenage life.
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAA! It rocks! Here is a philosophy poem. (The two are iinexplicably entwined)
Ever heard of the solipsism campaign for support?
One of your better efforts. 3.