Nicholas Jones
on some deleted poem
25 Oct 2002, 7:02 AM
You make me ashamed to be of the same species.
Telling, very telling. Good stuff.
Not bad at all!
rosiebailey
on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom
25 Oct 2002, 2:18 AM
Great Poem
George bush just wants to blow everyone up so that he is remembered like abraham, but he is going to be remembered as crazy
Nice one, tails - SAFE, MATE!!!!
Not exactly subtle.
Nice. 7
Great! Well done.
dis is wicked
Haha, that is wonderful.
Hahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
Funny, funny stuff, although you are a pervert of the first degree and need locking up. Still, very funny stuff!
You sad sad little boy. When you write this stuff, do you think abouth things like, for instance, the people of who are killed randomly by a sniper? I don't for a minute think that you actually find that cool. So stop writing this stuff. Unless you do find it cool, in which case please seek help before the FBI find you.
You deliver the rhymes pretty well. 'Babbling brook' is a bit cliched. But the feelings of loss and regret and sweetly drawn.
If I was wearing by pedant's hat, I'd say this wasn't a sonnet because it's not always iambic. But I'm feeling quite laidback today (although I hate my landlord, but that's a different matter). I like the nature imagery which is subverted by a sense of darkness.
deano
on 3 distinctively different attempts remembering one thing by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Oct 2002, 2:22 AM
wow this is weird
A tornado sprouts
From my lucid attempts at concentration????
but i like it
Another deserving case for Care In The Community, it seems. Still, pretty bloody funny!
No offence, but this is utter drivel. Keep your bigoted, homophobic rhetoric to yourself, and do not bring this site into contempt with this brand of poorly-scrawled bullshit ever again!
Supreme obsene quality!!
Top stuff, tim absolutely wonderful