Christof
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2002, 2:34 AM
I think he's being sarcastic. And it's oh so funny.
DUDE THIS SUCKS ARSE
I had a similar experience when I fell asleep on the train and woke up in Reading. I don't know where Bishop Stortford is, though. Ace.
A know a song by the Beatles about Norway (Norwegian Wood...isn't it good). It seems to me that you dislike Miss Tarquin De La Bog (A.K.A Miss Tarquin Del Boy Toilet) would you like to form a sort of allinace against her with me and Nicholas Jones
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Shut up the lot of you. Who cares if its inverted or not! I happen to like football a lot (BLackburn Rovers rule by the way) and I feel this peom portray's every football fans nightmare (apart from conceeding in the very last minute to lose).
Give the lad some credit!
At least he writes decent poems (not like Tarquain whatever her name is)
Yo dont like those yankee b"^&??(!! good on ya!!
Watch your Back!
BLADE
Blue Magpie why don't you stop slagging evry1 off as this is extremely pointless. The fact that you can not make decent poems urself means that you are a hypocrite!!!
This is a terrible story. You really should get some help from somewhere. Listen to god'swife's advice.
Perhaps you could lose the last line? Your love of nature comes through loud and clear and the last line just seems to spoil your structure.
This must be a song... you're a great songwriter... You should show somebody your talent, cause this was really great.
This is just how football should be. Muck and pies and hopelessness. It should be 'affiliated', but I don't care a rat's arse about the inversion.
Very good poem... you must have been in love when you wrote this?
Good poem.... I liked it a lot...
What on earth is that. I've written better poems whilst constipated on the toilet. Heres a poem for you:
Oh how I would hate to snog
The infamous Tarquin Del Boy Bog
Good isn't it...and it rhymes
Very meaningful, clever rhyming
Garbage
This comes over like a rap, good rhythms.