good one !! stay there...

Beautiful! A triumph of pure, beautiful meaning over the contraints of quality!! 10!!!!1

Ace, bum boy!!!!!!!!!!!11111111

i don't agree that both cannot stay... there can be no light without darkness...

Right!(though the poem not that ceative!)nice7

last stanza I liked.6

Good!I like the rhythm.enjoyed reading it twice.9

This is so sad and full of insight. I love you sweetie.

well done... one of the best messages on this site

You are the scum, American, propaganda artist know it all. You have no research to back your info up, you dont even know how to spell Allah! Dumbass learn facts first

everybosy knows this... however the info is sometimes misleading... relegion like everything was always misused... take a look at the roman empire dating back 500 AD and the catholic church.... what we are seeing now is noting new....

Okay...I'm a blonde!! I'm not a bembo :( snif snif, not all us blondes are little whores you know? I'm not vein, but I am attractive, and I'm still a virgine...Imagine that...and I'm not a slut :) so not all blondes are bad, hehe. Okay enough of that, I get what you are reffering too. But besides that I love you poem!! I can't wait to read more of your work!! 9/10 =)

Snif Snif...I'm going to cry...that's so sweet!! she's a lucky girl, damn I won't a guy to write a poem for me, but the only thing they think of is how the hell there gonna get me in bed...but ne ways, LOL I love this poem, hehe I love your work!! 10/10 =)

Hey! I'm sorry Everytime you IM I have to go, or I can't talk right away, it seems like I don't have time for chit chat anymore I"m sorry!! Im me today and I"ll promise I"ll talk to you!! Oh yeah and like usual you pull out another fabulouse lyric!! You know I love you work! E-mail me if you ever get the chance!! Wuv ya!! =) 10 10

It is the fucking Lorax. He really does exist. I knew it. Indeed, you may be a cute, albeit, odd looking little fellow and an activist for good causes like that big hole in the sky, but your poem here, well, sucks. But you knew that already, because of your genius.

Nice idea, but way too wordy for my personal tastes

Hi Crazi, Love is a great subject fro a poem, but that means everybody writes about it. To make your poetry worth reading you have to do something special, bland staements like this mean very little to a reader of poetry because they really have very little to offer, you have to offer the reader something new, and as the experience itself is as old as mankind that newness can only come in the expression, something which you haven't evinced here. As an example take friendship, we all experience friendship, if I wrote You are a wonderful person. I love being with you, you are so beautiful I cherish every moment with you. I would have expressed something of friendship, but it is not poetry, if you want to see how I really id it have a look at the poem Friendship which I will post in a minute once I have submitted this

Very nice9

sorry i don't get this

You're a dick.