Interesting flow, definitely got the message. rock on man..I hear you

very good poem, but you need to revise your grammar

Hey shadow! Long time no see!! Well I've been waiting for your next poem then...there it is. hehe. Well hm...you should know me by now...I don't like when people go on about nothing, just mindless chitter chatter...it bugs the heck out of me, and it's just a waste of space. But this poem isn't like that!!! =) I love it, great poem, and I like your point of view! 9/10 =)

oh, how I know that feeling too well... finding solace in the dark shadows... great poem Katie :o)

phd? i wouldn't use this to wipe my feet or my ass..it might make a good present wrapping though..for one of those friends i despise with a sidelong smile..you don't make me smile, and your not really worth despising..better stick to badmitton..oh..and mr.thomas would slice his throat if he knew of your blatantly foul attachment.the praising of great writers is better left to great writers..not pretentious twits..

I liked how you described each moment... each moment of your sensual dream, brought upon the computer screen... good read Katie :O)

Naughty, naughty! Do your parents know you do this in the dark corners of your bedroom at night after they've gone to sleep?

Stay away from the corners! Stay in the middle of the ring...Love as a constant battle. Well, how true.

By the way, is Unity Mitford the one who went to Germany?

ACtually the ambiguity is great here, it's hard to get a handle on preicsely what's going on with the 'kitty', and the feeling of loss is somehow reflected in that

That takes guts... Good luck in the future.

Maybe the Internet is a good place for the imagination to run free? I don't know. But you'd better hope Mum & Dad don't find out. They won't be keen on that kind of imaginative release.

It is lonely at the bottom. Being lonely means that nothing cna be a comfort. Sometimes having no punctutation is good, but here it isn't.

You need to punctuate and also it should be 'there are people' in line 2. I really do get the impression of your thoughts echoing around though.

Sorry, but it doesn't do it for me. And I'm in a mean mood today. Too diffuse - try making it shorter and more intense.

there's something funny about this, yet truly idiotic. i guess the 2 go hand in hand at times. get rid of the first stanza and this will be better. "that's cabbage for you" is a classic line.

To the point. Powerful. Honest. You did it right. Keep up the good work.

Pitiful. Sorrry.

Good, poem, carry on. Very strong rymth.

I don't know much about Verdi, but this captures what impression I do have of it. Mysterious, heavy. Great