vulcan
on I don't fit in by devina
8 Oct 2002, 4:10 AM
I like this!7/10
The last stanza lets you down in this.
Brilliant. 9. A highly enjoyable read. To the outraged commenteers: if you don't like his poems, don't read his poems. Simple.
I'm here!nice!a personal poet!i like it.
good!(schiwwer?Norwegian?=shiver?)
been there felt that..
real close to home
the first stanza is marvelous beautiful!what a rhythmic Spirit you possess!7/8
O very nice!I really enjoy reading your poems.feelings are expressed happily!That's effective.wish you more success.
Vow!you are a Poet!10000000000000
smooth. groove. you moved ...me
7/10!Asia?we're friends I suppose!
good theme!(though not your best I think!)
too personal!(so I can not say wether i like it or not)not any poetic attempt to heighten feelings.
good!5(for I don't consider rock stars as heroes!but the poem is good otherwise!)
Hi,
Not only is it hard to make any sense of, but it is full of typos, it looks as if this is just a first draft to me, perhaps you could polish it a bit for the sake of presentation. I will withold my vote in the hope that you can see your way to edit it a bit. You wouldn't like what I'd say at the moment anyway.
Do you seriously want me to vote on this.
I don't know if this is directed at me or not. If it is, I get your points. Mr P&K, I apologize for attacking you the way I did. Certainly uncalled for. I read the NY times article, you made another valid point. D.A., somehow I managed to hit a nerve with you also. Your points with regard to my Haiku were correct. I have managed to make this site feel click-ish and myself unwelcome.I wish it were different. Thanks for your time.
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