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emman on Ouch by heroditus 21 Sep 2002, 9:19 PM

??

wunboi on Glassblowers by Christof 21 Sep 2002, 11:04 PM

Neat,precise but marred by the first line .I love the irony of the second stanza.

horus8 on My Mountain (An ode to the nature poem) by Bachus 22 Sep 2002, 10:20 AM

see.. if i didn't have such a superman haircut..i could be as ironic as this flatulent piker. i think ? i

edge on Hard Times by beakism 22 Sep 2002, 10:21 AM

LMAO

horus8 on I'm your father! by flatliner 22 Sep 2002, 10:23 AM

very multilayered...good for you...so i guess if you start listening to god..your son will start listening to you...you fail...your beak is minus the four seeded soy bean..just kidding 11!

wunboi on Gone Away by Christof 21 Sep 2002, 11:19 PM

Very good . Tha last stanza is a corker!

edge on some deleted poem 22 Sep 2002, 10:16 AM

the second two verses are quite good, but the first and last are too similar to a famous, already written poem....this needs a rework

royalflesh on Ouch by heroditus 21 Sep 2002, 10:12 PM

if frogs had wings they wouldn't hit their asses when they moved one place to another...right? hip-hop..don't trip on the stairs behind my left ear or fall out the window downstairs. 5

royalflesh on Romantic Getaway by ASTRO-GLIDE 21 Sep 2002, 10:24 PM

I don't know about you techie-writer's but my computer must be outdated (you idiot). Write so that we can read, fool. Don't you proof-read. Apparently not.

horus8 on the place by ThreeFourSix 22 Sep 2002, 10:29 AM

if you are a guru..i am the shit leak streaming over my flexing calf muscle currently..this suffers from elitism and bad images with no concrete foundation...name a god name a place..name a flower...never be vague...because say you say lilac or asgard or pluto...theseus.. all of a sudden you allow people to have much much more in common with the piece, because their favorite flower is lilac their favorite god is hades and so on...good luck here at poemranker...toooddless.

horus8 on yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh 22 Sep 2002, 10:34 AM

take out the last sentence and this fucker is a nucleur hotcake fuck you get the HORUS8 JESUS AND HITLER WERE FRIENDS AWARD FOR POETRY on this fine 22 of september..enjoy..seriously consider dropping that last sentence though less is more. 10.

horus8 on First, you gotta bend over.. by Bachus 22 Sep 2002, 10:43 AM

did i write this?...I'VE BEEN PLAGARIZED help police help !! oh mighty jesu the cad has barrelled the falls....ha!!

horus8 on some deleted poem 22 Sep 2002, 10:47 AM

now that's crisp and sharpe! kill kill kill kill ha ha ha ha kill kill kill kill ha ha ha ha pil pil pil pil love love love love? hi z.l

horus8 on some deleted poem 22 Sep 2002, 10:53 AM

lol! HORUS8 PRIZE FOR "SEXUAL REALITY" AWARD for spectacularariasse poetics....carry on ..ha! fucking riot...9.

horus8 on some deleted poem 22 Sep 2002, 10:57 AM

righteously vivid....fantastic imagery..as usual..scarringly honest though preconcieved...7.

vulcan on For You by aperfecttool77 22 Sep 2002, 11:19 AM

"when I die,it will be known I died for Coelia"read that sonnt by W.Percy?The same theme.I liked it as I liked that sonnet.(of course in a different level.)6

emman on Hard Times by beakism 21 Sep 2002, 9:34 PM

*laughing* great I tell you...I've thouht kinda the same several times while I've read "footprints"...bullcrap :)

royalflesh on .:|bittersweet|:. by emman 21 Sep 2002, 10:09 PM

full of painfull images and hopefull (less) pains that others...(or one) causes. Pass the vermouth...my lips are burning.

nentwined on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit 22 Sep 2002, 1:29 AM

yeehaw =)

emman on Love is just a word by trev086 21 Sep 2002, 9:18 PM

hmm...the meaning of it is good...but I don't like it very much in whole...sorry...