eviltwin
on Spellbound by Limness
20 Sep 2002, 4:05 PM
i love the rhythm of this piece. it's excellent.
wow, very intense. impressive. definite 10.
t/y nentwined
:)
eat more haggis...be well. lest the guppies attack and chew 'pon your little toe..
What?!!!!
hmm... interesting
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
20 Sep 2002, 7:25 PM
Where did your other poems go?
Trolling is only funny when the people you're trolling don't realise it. nice try for a poem I guess you are gunna sibmit it? Boy oh boy your are dumber than I thought!!!
Point taken. Point taken.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
20 Sep 2002, 10:42 PM
I became a member of poemranker just to vote on this poem.
This ditty show just how ironic life is without taking itself too seriously. Brilliant!
Shakespearean Justice at its best, documented foolishness. Nice, dark child
The topic of where desire starts is always an interesting one Bacchus. The detail of the cortex is ethereal
Truth is indeed in the cloak of the words. The style is tripped out, but cool
This poem is tempting, intriguing--like its author
Duhh, I guess it did work you were the Dumb ASS that responded again DUH!
no sugar coating. beautiful. wonderful job at opening eyes. don't change a thing. 10
picture painted... work admired... and memory kept. 9
no big words like the other comments. i just really enjoyed it. i'm no linguist, i can't come up with an ellaborate summary of my thoughts. just know that you've impressed me. 9
wonderful. 8
Time is dealt with on this side of the galaxy but I do recall an interest for some such as yourself that have a nac for weaving thier own webs or should I say blankets of time in your case?