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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Full Fathom Five by vulcan 15 Sep 2002, 9:50 AM
I have to say that 'Far from the madding crowd' is perhaps the most tedious, boring, long, boring, long, tedious piece of writing I have ever been forced to read.
god'swife on Fuck the stars by Patrice727 15 Sep 2002, 12:37 PM
Satellite.
PawnedTidal on Black Heart by brazen 15 Sep 2002, 11:17 AM
Ok, I know nothing about painting, and apparently little more about writing, but I'm going to have to agree with brazen on this one. When you are writing fiction or a research artile, revision is great; essential, even. However, pieces such as this one are meant to tell a story of emotions - describing how you felt at the precise moment in which it was written. In my opinion, revising such works later can only serve to tell a different story; not to improve upon the first one.
god'swife on bitterness to tenderness to endlessness by Crakyamuni 15 Sep 2002, 1:15 PM
No joy to read. Improves slighty as you go, but no go. Dogs in deep trances? What dinner show is that?
god'swife on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit 15 Sep 2002, 1:21 PM
Shouldn't there be a comma after <same>? Also <that> seems unnecessary.
god'swife on How? Well... by RWAndersen 15 Sep 2002, 12:42 PM
Choppy. Polish won't add to her shine? Dreadful analogy to lay on a person.
god'swife on Dry tears by bdub420 15 Sep 2002, 12:46 PM
Cryptic. Send free decoder ring please.
god'swife on Mantis by renwick 15 Sep 2002, 12:55 PM
You're beginning analogy is anything but poetic. May I suggest a Brazilian wax to rid her of those pokey sharps and splinters. Stupid. By the way this "thing" you've posted makes it glaringly obvious you are a terrible lay. 1.... which is more than those poor 48 would rank you in bed.
god'swife on You Win by ritz1605 15 Sep 2002, 1:02 PM
Lot's of typos and grammatical errors. But correcting this won't help. I say shoot it and put it out of it's misery.
god'swife on No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni 15 Sep 2002, 1:10 PM
Oh worshipper of the sacred Budda, go back to the creamery. What this is is what it was and shall forever be, caca.
poetandknowit on Full Fathom Five by vulcan 15 Sep 2002, 1:54 PM
Superior literature my ass. This is stuff they teach you in high school. Besides being rather a yawner in the grand tradition of Hardy the writing falls into the christof school of lacking Umph!!!
poetandknowit on some deleted poem 15 Sep 2002, 1:56 PM
The poem lacks experience. Oh well, nice try.
jlanza on How? Well... by RWAndersen 15 Sep 2002, 6:24 PM
I thought it was great. It put a smile on my face and thought some may call it "choppy" I thought the form worked great for this one.
vulcan on Tide by <~> 14 Sep 2002, 11:14 PM
I liked it very much like your "Falling".I sent you an email.thanks.
vulcan on Tide by <~> 14 Sep 2002, 11:15 PM
I liked it very much like your "Falling".I sent you an email.thanks.
vulcan on some deleted poem 15 Sep 2002, 8:30 AM
Bravo!I liked it very much.you have expressed the feeling very truly.(just i think after the case of girlfriend poem ends unexpectedly.Did you mean it?)10
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The silent lecture(secret names) by horus8 15 Sep 2002, 9:48 AM
WTF!? Now the chimney.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 15 Sep 2002, 10:18 AM
Was he 'half the man' because he had lost his starboard buttock during a disastrous BUMIKAZI raid on an enemy wessel? Was he 'twice the man' because this had gained him experience +3?
PawnedTidal on Pissing Rant by brazen 15 Sep 2002, 11:02 AM
Wow, that's... angry. But effective.
some deleted user on The silent lecture(secret names) by horus8 15 Sep 2002, 6:33 AM
How I miss these words, endlessly intriguing me all those years ago. Beautiful.