pete
on deluge by kawakurdi
14 Sep 2002, 2:20 AM
imho the alliteration is overdone ..... 4
a bit greetings cardy .... heart's in almost the right place though , i think ..... 3
I know exactly how you feel.
Great band, bad poem.
you're such a fag.....lol! "brotherly", as you secretly queef in the night....sounds more like a boring bunch of queens to me...oh yeah...and redundant. enjoy!f
from my perspective it's killing the indians ... sorry , native americans .. that made part of the americas great .... 3
may i suggest shooting up morphine...have fun. toodles. 2/10. oh and move, and you you dont live here...move here and invent a better shoe bomb. this tooted fodder. enjoy your time here. have a blast tell your friends the 'stiff taled lemurs. piker!
This poeme is ace!!
Poor.
Poor god damnit. I just said. Oh fuck I suppose I have to vote. 10.
indeed. 8/10.??
What? is this suppose to be morally appeasing to you on some enlightening level. you aren't level. get leveled, or be leveled. prepare.0 . Now the out the cat hole...pst...your structure is weak therefore you get no beak. perchance you squeek. sqwack.squack.ed.
unfortunately even the wise fat crosslegged one couldn't help this...better just go with satanmonk, or the inevitably vague and stronger monkfish. cereal dish? nay, nay! cereal is for bowls you twanker. 2/10.
typo on line six bros"you", possibly your?. is better. no?.. hows the cold. hope a bit better. pray tell. my son starts preschool this monday. wow. time flys when you're going broke. smoke?k
Nice lyric. Better than most crap you hear on the radio these days.
A Un painted park bench .... is this a typo or politically subtle ? and are people a pain to the promise or visa versa ? too staccato for me but i live outside the promise and only live with the threat ..... 4