hm...interesting poem indeed. There's some things I myself would change but over all... i'll rate a 7/10 =)

I like the 'lyric' you got here, nice flow, pretty well balanced, 6/10 =)

I agree with the changes that have been sujested to you, shoule should edit it a lttle, and see what you come up with 5/10 =)

Who's God? Because I kind of look like my Mom and Pops. well hopefully more my mom but as I get older I see my dad, ugh. He was ugly, you know. So are they god? Well my daughters look a bit like me, although my fist one is probably a mutt considering my ex slept with, well she probably even slept with you doug. So, am I god? Wow. You know them CHRISTians are pretty wacky themselves.

Suddenly this poem came upon me and the lonesome thing made me so lonely for something besides this rubbish heap of words.

You understand the pain of the day, the pleasure of the night. Its only friday and I can feel the monday morning blues

Get out of here you stupid little fuck! People have been warning you for days that these poems are obviously not yours. You must have the most pathetic life. I mean their are people here who are willing to put there truly bad poetry on here and get reamed for it. That at least takes courage. You on the other hand are simply looking for anonymous approval. You need to talk to a counselor.

A cracker leaves you hanging than bam, v. funny

Anger management. In written form. Healthy choice, PT

the meaning I love, the poem on the other is hand, is nice, but not quit...flowing? But over all i'll give you a 7/10 =)

you night want to stop passing off joke poems commonly found on the internet as your own work. it makes you look like an ass.

there's some spelling boo-boo's, but hell there alot in mine too! Bue over all, I love this poem! so i give you a 1/10! My true vote wil be a 8/10!!

This is awful with or without the explanation. Try expanding the actual so called poem. Also the first image has been so over-used it 's best to avoid it. We allready know what you're talking about since you were foolish enought to title this thing 9/11. Aren't you sick of it yet 9/11 9/11 9/11 9/11 9/11. It doesn't even have a proper name.

Wow. How poetical. I hadn't realized poemranker was a forum for this kind of thing. Couldn't you have written it in such a way so that it was self-explanatory? Wouldn't that have been the better option, instead of lashing out like this? Honestly, it wasn't very much of an effort. Why be so angry in your defense of it? Did you ever thinkg that they (the idiots, that is, were provoking you because the poem itself does nothing but make them cring? Sorry to be so harsh, but jeez!

Um...I don't understand it, not all of you lines are in Haiku formatting. so 5/10, I'm a genrus person =)

I can't say i understand the poem to the fullest linght, but yet I like it, except for the hole it's all on one line, LoL. 7/10 =)

A cracker

I like this poem. There are things i would change, but no one, or no poem is ever perfect. I'll give you a solid 8/10 =)

what is the point of this stupidity?

now, was that really necessary, doug? any of it?