some deleted user
on The Big NO by alexander
7 Sep 2002, 1:36 PM
this is pretty much crap -5/10
yeah! a solid 8 inches of hard hoodlum cockiness. Do you think it was wrong of me to not rape them all, plus take the money...i'm a ham for those convenience store cameras. smile.o
Sorry for the repetition.a mistake!
It comes to us all
This is a load of crap-1/10
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
7 Sep 2002, 1:29 PM
Takes a woman to write something as a good as this excellent-9/10
I loved " the leaf crossed his path...."-moved me -10/10
its not the burgers pal its you !
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
7 Sep 2002, 1:38 PM
This is class, it made me glad I came here
The towering metaphor was not very original but I like the construction.the end of it moving7
Very nice the whole thing!8
Esp the first stanza.(a vivid picture)8 again!
what is up with the juvenile rhyming in the first part of 16 lost? guide me, oh ergoted one, for i fail to see the light. oh, and, where do thoughts come from?
it was very wrong. you know they wanted it. plus, they WERE asking for it, weren't they?
What I want to know is why this discussion took place at the bottom of my 'poem'.
And Settle, while I appreciate your bountiful wealth of knowledge, I don't appreciate you widening the screen with a long line of BRLRLBRLBLRBL.
No not you vulcan, sorry. I was refereing to god'swife.
there's a gay pub down the road, you know.