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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Don't Wanna Know by nightii 7 Sep 2002, 10:39 AM

I bet you would care if they had AIDS. Think about THAT the next time you dine!

vulcan on A Memory of Something Yet to Come by brazen 7 Sep 2002, 11:51 AM

The towering metaphor was not very original but I like the construction.the end of it moving7

Lenore on More 7-Eleven holdups. by Bachus 6 Sep 2002, 9:45 PM

Hey! These would be great at: http://www.templeofblackjesus.com Funny shit! Solid 8!

god'swife on some deleted poem 6 Sep 2002, 9:47 PM

excessively showy. The images you create are conspicious with their vulgar display of adjectives.

vulcan on Thoughtless Deed by craiggiarc1971 7 Sep 2002, 3:01 AM

"I only love"sounds better.No direct hint to the thoughtless deed.maybe intentional?It's good and could be better if your tone be more offensive and sharp towards those who have commited the deed the You only loved.I'll read it again and will give a better grade if you arrange it once more.but in its present form 5

vulcan on some deleted poem 7 Sep 2002, 3:02 AM

Nice!6

abi on Leaf on the wind by troll454 7 Sep 2002, 5:44 AM

Sad and poignant-nice I agree with Vulcan

vulcan on Thoughtless Deed by craiggiarc1971 7 Sep 2002, 7:32 AM

Do you mean mine was one or not?thanks

vulcan on Cardiovascular workout formula by abi 7 Sep 2002, 7:42 AM

HaHaHa!your poem's word was this!(not more laugh even!just hahaha!)So 3.thanks

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Thoughtless Deed by craiggiarc1971 7 Sep 2002, 7:43 AM

Good use of 'strife' to rhyme with 'life'! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! I'M SURE YOU'LL BE A POPULAR POETE IN NO TIME!!!!!!!1111111111111

heroditus on Leaf on the wind by troll454 7 Sep 2002, 7:43 AM

Almost haiku like at the end

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 7 Sep 2002, 8:29 AM

EXCELLENT WORK! Sometimes people don't say what they're really thinking, do they!? [I hope your liver implodes]

nightii on some deleted poem 7 Sep 2002, 8:35 AM

I don't know what you're trying to say. I don't get it. Is there a point to this?

god'swife on Celebration by some deleted user 6 Sep 2002, 9:18 PM

Forget the last stanza it's totally useless. Everything contained within it is implied in the rest of the poem. How about "I kissed from your breasts" "the down of your thighs"

Tintagiles on some deleted poem 6 Sep 2002, 9:36 PM

I'm not saying you're wrong about the awful, but convince me there's something wrong with gaUdy.

vulcan on Perfect Love by snowing 7 Sep 2002, 12:18 AM

OK!

god'swife on Perfect Love by snowing 6 Sep 2002, 10:10 PM

What makes this a poem? Please explain.

craiggiarc1971 on Thoughtless Deed by craiggiarc1971 7 Sep 2002, 4:08 AM

Constructive critism would be good!

abi on some deleted poem 7 Sep 2002, 5:42 AM

beautiful and uplifting.

Limness on At the Olde Absinthe by Limness 7 Sep 2002, 6:55 AM

i edited. votes are nice. vote early, vote often?