daniella
on {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8
2 Sep 2002, 1:15 PM
true to self
class. class. claaaassss.
SHUT UP.
yes. yes you will
he could love you
i am falling in love with this man
absolute perfection.
i could love this man
for you....only the truth. for me... pearl vodka martini w/a touch of vermooth.
PK, very nice, I can relate
very cute. thanks for keeping it on the level. ;)
A beauty indeed. Sweet Selene, even the tides arrange themselves to her mood.
I love the sentiment but the last lines in the first and second stanzas frustrate me. I want them to glide better.
I always love pretty things. There's no grandeur in crin's poem. Maybe you've got some wrong ideas about me.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2002, 12:01 PM
I like this. It's somehow familiar in its imagery, pauses, and frustration . . .
hey 'spuds' stanza 5, line 3 (dung)....just helping you obtain the fluffy mashed consistency that an artist of your caliber deserves daily, hourly , secondly, jiffily....
i refuse to believe that our hoofs are one in the same...because you sir, know nothing of love, spuming , ordunking witches. piker!
A nice simple poem - I wish I were the person who was missed in such a heartfelt way. I agree that the last stanza worked the best.
Didn't do much for me - sorry.
is this why the europeans and canadians despise you?..nay..nay...you sir, are an unlit minora..