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<{Baba^Yaga}> on Meta by nentwined 28 Aug 2002, 5:58 PM
windbreaker. hot stuff! 9/10.
anagram on The Ballet Studio by Corey McHattan 28 Aug 2002, 6:06 PM
Excellent.
Bachus on you're never alone by nentwined 28 Aug 2002, 5:28 PM
Malthusian.8/10!
Bachus on remember me by Katie 28 Aug 2002, 5:21 PM
dig the typos purpose, and false child banter! you pass! at what? deviled egging.19/10
Sigh'ense... on Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense... 28 Aug 2002, 8:35 PM
Thankx 4 the critique. and I look forward top more of your analysis...
anagram on Comparisons by anagram 28 Aug 2002, 5:47 PM
Sorry don't do the re-write thing.Once it's down dated and signed that's it for me.Know this isn't whats going to provide the best work ever but I am with those who say that if you think to hard about it the idea wasn't any good in the first place.
anagram on Fetch by Limness 28 Aug 2002, 5:53 PM
Excellent, I've had one as well. He's a basket case short of his bed He walks backwards while wagging his head.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined 28 Aug 2002, 6:06 PM
croupier polo challenge......we won it all in the third chucker 8/10n
Katie on To Kiss by Jody Conn 28 Aug 2002, 6:23 PM
I love your poem!
god'swife on Comparisons by anagram 28 Aug 2002, 6:25 PM
But it's never good in the first place. Think of it. The first time you made love. Now compare that to what you're capable of now. I go through hell with my poems. Don't think I just toss those out. Some come easy like Monica, but I still have to sit with them and work them through. It's worth it.
god'swife on Until Then by Katie 28 Aug 2002, 6:41 PM
Night, bright, shore, more, land, sand, away, away, away. Katie, plain and simple.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Until Then by Katie 28 Aug 2002, 7:04 PM
Well fucking sail away then. Or do whatever it is you have to do before you can sail away. Is this supposed to be "meaningful"? There are about 9,000,000,000,000,000 instances of writing in the world that consist of nothing but a) vague, childlike, pseudo-dreamlike imagery, b) line breaks and c) a few half-arsed attempts at rhyme, and call themselves "poems". Other people then go on to call these instances of writing "beautiful", because they apparently think that anything that's vaguely sentimental and meaningless enough to be open to their particular wish-fulfilment interpretation is "beautiful". I believe this is one of those instances. 10/10!!!
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 28 Aug 2002, 7:06 PM
Katie - Doylum is a nice, honest gentleman, who has no plans to capture you, and also has not captured Father Christmas. If he offers you a ride, accept it.
Katie on A piece i shall never play again by ==Doylum 28 Aug 2002, 7:31 PM
Ya you are right this is um... a very personal poem, lol. But it is a good one at that. Interesting but good! <3 katie
Agemo-Z on A-Team, vol I by Agemo-Z 28 Aug 2002, 7:59 PM
Who the fuck gave this 0's? Jesus Christ! Goddammit!
Sigh'ense... on some deleted poem 28 Aug 2002, 8:48 PM
Very sweet and comfortably read. Lovely in a saucy way(saucy meaning individually expressive and unique,signature comprehension, just as poetry should be). Philosophy by Da1
Sigh'ense... on desire is the constant by silvertongueddevil 28 Aug 2002, 9:03 PM
DAMN! keep it deep and refreshing... DA1 meant it too!
Bachus on Uncertainty by nentwined 28 Aug 2002, 5:19 PM
god damn this things a fucking poltergeist...be gone foul djin i banish thee!!!!!!!!
Bachus on you're never alone by nentwined 28 Aug 2002, 5:59 PM
Malthusian.8/10!
Sigh'ense... on as the hostage by silvertongueddevil 28 Aug 2002, 8:55 PM
Creatively sexy and attention demanding. Da1, with criminal intentions to kidnap.