I'm with Anagram; hang in there, D.O. Tomorrow you may meet someone who'll help you to see clear to a different perspective on your life a then we'll all be rating your odes to a butterfly, or some such.

Hey Swishy, post some poetry.

Sorry anagram, a bad poem is a bad poem, and this is quite terrible. I have encountered numerous younger poets who have merit, but they look beyond there own hormonal difficulties.

Yeah 'fraid so.I take it you are talking about the film which I have never seen, somebody just mentioned it recently.Either that or I have become victim to what I think is my second failure to understand an Americanism this evening.

Why is it that every night we get more examples of writing straight out of a teenager's sad life diary? And why is it that every life lead by a teenager on this site, regardless of age, sounds exactly the same? If you rearranged this thing and changed all the words but kept the rhythm, you might have a nice children's rhyme.

OK enough is enough.I couldn't take 'Suicide II' or any future Suicides. You should listen to 'Don't Try Suicide' by Queen,track 2 side 2 'The Game' album and see if the great man can steer you in the right direction.

o.k. I targeted you at first because you were the first person I noticed who was making personal stabs at people, on more then one occasion I might add. Then with time I realized it was an actual trend on this sight. The reason I choose to "warn" newcomers was because I wanted them to be able to stay on long enough to understand that there was more going on here then poem/people bashing. This site has alot of merit.I mean the reason I keep coming back is because the people here are actually smart and have something to say. Even this cyber- sparing, what do i mean sparing, this is out and out battling, with you is good for my brain. I've visited other poetry forums and there bland at best. Everythings smilely faces and fairies and rainbows.So tell me what else you need me to do, so you won't be upset (and i'm not being sarcastic)

Of good god, see all the other adolescent angsters on this site and do a group hug. All your stuff is so over-the-top melodramatic, filled with such serious problems as pimples and being grounded on Friday night so you cannot go to the mall. Just wait, it gets worse. But seriously, contact all the teeny bops on the site and give a big hug to cure your sad miserable writing.

I think we keep mis-reading each other because we can't hear any tone of voice. It adds alot. I am neither righteous or indignant.

Isn't it fair to say that other teenagers might read this and see themselves and be grateful for not being alone.As I understand it there is no restriction on the age of the writers and readers on this site and would contend that there is room for all.

Didn't I just read this? Why did you just make it one poem? It is the same. Both are so filled with redundancies that you could cut down both into one haiku. The random file is throwing some real crap out tonight.

Wait one second this Angel's working, in the poem it says sh'es sleeping I' confuseded. Please explain.

It sounds like a child wrote it.. oh yea.. you are a child right? You did say that you were 6 didn't you? Well, I must say.. who are you to go around rating every's poems as a 0? When the only poem that I would rate a zero.... IS YOUR'S! If I do say so myself... your poems are actually kind of funny! Stop writing like a 2 year old and maybe your poems will get better ratings!

You know p&k the more time I spend going through random poetry the more I want to agree with you. Well atually you couldn't be more correct, but their just looking for someplace to post their stuff. Maybe we should have a referral site for teenage angst.

Hate to state the obvious but given the title of the piece it was it would seem written by somebody's child.

This is more adolescent then a wet dream. As for raping the English; and so her did I pretty much takes care of that. Is it skank cherry pie' that's suppose to propel this thing to the heights? Just like Daddy always says some people post their poetry only because it pleases them.0

Sorry GW gotta go it's 4:30am here , need my beauty sleep will speak to you and explain tomorrow.Night night anagram.

Refreshingly heartfelt for this site. Narudasian? Does remind me of Pablo. Another poem that could work as a song; Shawn Colvin could do it well.

Creative use of the Limerick form. Some may say they were caught in a current and carried, but, reflecting on't, might later admit to plying those waters with all sails out.

Pfft. 'disturbedone182'? Read the first few lines of the poem. Do you really have to ask?