bdub420
on You Were There by danevie
26 Aug 2002, 5:55 AM
past and presenet tense kinda mixed up
Consider you were trying for the joke element you deserve no praise.
What's the point? Pure stupidity.
may i please request that all further incubus songs be taken from S.C.I.E.N.C.E or before...thank you.
And then take off those shoes and get in that kitchen and make me some supper!! Although the sentiment may be sincere, the poem is filled with over the top mush.
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/incubus/echo.html
go here, to answer all questions...trust me...all is not real.
i, too, remember that first kiss! it was magical, indeed. wondering what i'm doing now? well, mostly watching TV and reading about the history of Iceland. how about you?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Aug 2002, 10:55 AM
this isn't the first of your poems to whet my appetite for incest, and i hope it won't be the last!
Different and interesting, watch the typos though, they detract.
yes, and thank you...i must remember to stop writing while trying to download porn. its too hard to focus.
Breathtaking form,
and a great way to catch all of the senses... I like!!
Nice!!!!
wow i am SO tired of seeing this poem crop up in the recent list, with a different user name each time.
Okay, off the site you fucking plagiarist hack.
This is the best of the three. Kipling would be proud.
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/incubus/justaphase.html...imitation in the sincerest form of flattery, correct?
I thought it had depth. trying to create picture of this was like a nightmare. Dark, with nowhere to go.
porn again poet eh !