True here's a few points for his story (sic)-8/10

Nice-10/10

It's good to breathe man

Outstanding-10/10

Bemuda schmuda god's wife get a life-interesting enough 7/10

Nice - 8/10

Nice touch-9/10

This wetback spic thinks your writing loves her. Esos monos negros son unos pinchi putos! Ole!

Very vivid and from the heart-10/10

Shrouded in ambiguity, but the structure adds to its vague nature still remaining linear. I just hope for your sake, that 'Caprice' is merely imagery and not a reference to last months FHM.

I like this, its very human at face value. It answers a question that many are asked on a daily basis. - Thumbs up and top marks 10/10.

A cunning twist!!! You have marks for effort, unfortunately the content leaves a little to be desired and should probably have remained in the playground.

Contributing to truth telling is a vile and irresponsible thing to do. Soon the state will be forced to crash land in your living room for upsetting the local livestock. They've been eating less and less of the Company chow. Ummm. There's nothing like ma's microwave reheating. She can peel back the film like no other. No thanks, I'll have dinner in my own room again tonight, I don't want to watch what you're watching. There's a story on E! about a crazy cyber-poet who died mysteriously of an overdose. No, I don't believe in conspiracy theories. He was a lunatic nobody, and the people who chatted with him on Das Internet say he was bound to self distruct, anyone could tell he had mental problems. I don't want to miss it

due to some issues that i have had to deal with(concerning a member named dark angel) i am forcing myself to no longer be a part of poem ranker. i am still going to keep on cheking up on my poems but i shall not enter anymore. or in other wards i will just be a floater. Nobody is forcing me to leav i just thoguht that it would be more appropriate for the situation if i just move on to another site and enter my poems where they are wanted and where nobody like dark angel can be a bitch or a basterd(whatever dark angel may be it can be both) to my poems and where nobody knows me and my poems and can actually appreciate them for what they really are and not just rank them with out reading them like dark angel did. so after today i will no longer be a part of this community(if i may call it that). i doubt anyone will miss my poems but in case they do(and i doubt it) they can always e-mail me for some more and i will be more than glad to wirte some for you.(since i love writing even though some say im not good enough to write like dark angel) well farewell poem rankers. Till next time, Angela

me too- 4/10

I see it too 10/10

pretentious crap

OK-9/10

You're a smart girl to leave before these evil-spuing derelicts really tear you apart. Hyenas are always on the look out for the young who have innocently wandered onto to this hellish plain.Don't worry though, Dark Angel and that deformed outcropping of his, Razorgrin, will be dying of cancer soon.It can't be helped. It runs rampant it such creatures. It's Feeble-DNA Syndrome.The genes themselves are aware of their diseased imperfection and they self distruct the host before they can replicate. Oh the miracles of nature! There are many many poetry forums out there that are not tainted with the ugly co-dependent psychosis of this site. Leave the fighting to me,god'swife, purveyor of Justice. I am pertinacious and full of vigor. Their sniveling comments bounce straight off my golden breastplate infecting their sub-standard eyes with their very own gonorrhea laden words. p.s.... your poem is tender and revealing, it just needs some professional guidance. If you're not taking some kind of creative writing course, you should because your thoughts have merit and a dulcetness worth refining. Best of luck.

Reference to a 'retinal flare' is a particularly haunting image in this somewhat eerie piece. A very moving 1984esque style that snares the imagination. You have a fan Ant - 9/10.