Thanks for the feedback. I'm a new member here.

sort of...

Do not listen to the winged avenger, he's just bitter, but he's also got the talent to back up his point, so yes, you're dismissed, carry on winged one, next victim please!

Wasn't this already written? There is one thing to put it into an allusion, but this is down right theft - my love is a red, red rose.

I was inspired to write this after reading "Pyschology of the Esoteric" by Osho. It's great if you want to learn how to truly interpret eastern philosophy as opposed to philosophizing about it and not experiencing it.

this is rather disjointed. you may want to fix the spelling mistake in your title :)

some mountains cast shadows in all directions simultaneously....7/10

What the fuck is this? I just don't understand it. It doesn't make sense.

lololololololololol! you are so scary and dark, you steal my poodles bark..you are so huge and black..you shrivel Jesu's ball sac...indeed you're the spine of the night, you assholed my mighty mag light...oh jesu oh jesu, please rectumfy my fears! lol! what shall we do...fleeeeeeee!

yes mojo, i totally agree with you on this one(i justy couldn't put my finger quite on it yet).z..i was waiting to ride the coat tails of someone elses comment into this evaluating this work of yours, cuz i couldn't figure out why i didn't quite get it, i mean it's cool to send the small minded to the dictionary over and over again, but you had me sprawling with your choice of huge cryptic words, and i know that razor grin is a very educated and well read young lady, and she uses the same sort of itinerary (she liked your use og fecund) in her methods of explaining her own writings (i love both of your guys stuff passionately honestly i do), but it is almost overwrought with power words and phrases and structured shape, it moves like an undiscovered deep sea creature, and that can be both good and bad...i'm waiting to vote on it until i piece it all together in a way that works for my need to see where it's been and where it's going, don't get me wrong, i'm still waiting to vote on it until i feel comfortable with it...you are a hell of a writer, and i have alot of respect for your poetry, cuz it demands it. few do..i will read it until i feel it..and then i'll vote..god bless the fecundity of restless desires in us all..s

i've never been through a blood hound, neither have i ever thrown one. If you'd noticed my penchant is for two legged beasts (beasts being the operative word), but don't let that stop you, presumabley they wouldn't get to upset, whats that saying of yours. don't worry darling, I'm SMALL in your SMALL arse, or something of that ilke. No i'm sure the hounds wouldn't mind. Time, Yes tricky to get ones head round, however we don't all operate on "central time" some of us live elsewhere than the centre of the universe.

Your metaphors are strong. You don't waste my time with un-neccessary words.I only had trouble at the beginning of the 2nd paragraph/stanza. The prepositional phrase between -certain nights.....that she- is complicated with several images (I believe there's 3)which is a good thing because they're strong time/place images, but it confused the flow of the piece a bit, for me anyway, perhaps they should be seperated by a comma or begun on a seperate line. Perhaps not. Otherwise I must say it's a better poem then I've read in a long time. Most of the people on this site I would be hard pressed to think of as poets. Based on this poem I would say you qualify.

fucking aye all the way richa! this is a tasty little treat, full of cliches, and bewildering contrasts..pleasantly forked to enrichen all of the senses to say the least...i think your approach is magnificently well rounding and you sir deserve to be voted for on and in....9/10...thank you the pleasure was all minei

this is a paleontoligists wet dream. a true hybrid theme racinc along the salt flats...you my friend are poised to be swept away by your own genuine brilliance 10/10

Sometimes, even if you assemble words beautifully you don't always get a solid result. There's nothing "wrong" with this piece, but it just didn't "hit" me, as much of your other work has. Perhaps there's an over indulgence in ambiguous imagery and a shortfall of plain story telling. Guess that's just my taste. 7. (Against your other submissions).

Awesome title, but the poem doesn't do it one bit of justice. .

Yes, you are fool making with this poetic ditty.

This is nice, and speaks of contentment, I like it.

Very interesting, I like it

Nicely written.