-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 4:34 PM
I am not 45. You, Sir, are a cad.
Cthulhu would be offended.
i i i i i what devon? Come on the TANKARD IS EMISARRY.
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
Earth talker is rent! That's pretty funny.
Bachus - And I'm going to get more rent as the clock toc's in.....now that's funny.
bachus runs over to his favorite gymnasium for his daily dose of rent. He doesn't know he does it man he's crazy, the man one crazy mother he splits you up so bad not even the plumes of goo he milks from his rent will stick you back together.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 4:26 PM
All I can say is - ( )
poemeranker fuck no poetandknowit the music of bands that seem to write the same song over and over again is for two kinds of people: adolescents and monomaniacs. I cannot defend the tastes of the first, and even the second, but equally I cannot condemn the second. For often do our finer moments in life come from a short or sustained bout of monomania? How many times have you obsessed over something and therein gained the greatest satisfaction? I have done so many times. Of course, obsession has equal love for disappointment; but is not the lowest Hell nothing when placed next to highest Heaven? When something worms and lodges into that part of your brain labeled 'special', there's no way to avoid obsessing on it, or at least falling into a sort of stupor when presented with anything to do with it. And I believe it's commonly said that obsessions form in childhood. So blame not the people who listen to this music, nor those who create it, but the despicable parents who allow their children to find such FILTH special.
are you speaking for the whole earth or just that which is above water? i guess it's better than earth saver, or earth mother, or earth lover.earth man, earth woman, THE PLANET EARTH...earth the final frontier...earth..what's its worth? boy this is fun...oh poem..yeah..i hate you doug..burn! wait actually that's a pretty well developed haiku. 5/10!
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
why england? why not say shrilanka?, or Baton Rouge, perhaps tasmania...oh if silence backfires, try the opposte, "shotgun the vagina"! in the name of jesusssss chrisssst! you're now on my liste! you and all of your young teen angst skater pickle pumpers...you're all on my liste'. yes indeed.r
I'd drop the second line (lol! "I thank you"). Or at least change it. I don't think fish 'wriggle'. I'm also not too sure about the part about the saplings 'trying to reach up'. I'm not sure that writing about saplings struggling to grow is very relevant. Though I suppose if it helps describe the scene then leave it. I don't know really. Other than that I thought it was quite a good poeme.
This is utter shit. Learn to use punctuation, dammit. Also, for your idiotic and cliched use of angel imagery, you should be skinned alive.
do you have kids? i have a son...he not only dances in the light, but he also does the occasional fascinating jigg on my wallet and my forehead. most people that write about birth are childless and unimaginatively lesbian..i sense that your none of the above. i could be all wrong..oh yeah the haiku..sounds like something people reassure themselves with each night while leaving a twelve step program
Honestly "fbab"... you write a poeme about thoughts that dwell deep, try to capture people, and are fear itself, and you claim it's not about Cthuluhulhllulhuhuhlu? For shame!
I'm going t o explod. How fucl did AHP Loveasctyf think of all that a
Hey charlatan! How's it going? Great! Good to hear it! If you are the same person as SkateBoardGurl5799, why did SkateBoardGurl5799 comment on one of your poemes? Do you find it comforting to compliment your own work? Who is SkaterGurlWithIssuez? Another of your usernames? GREEDY! You claimed that you only had two usernames. Yet again you lie. You lie and I have to be merciful for those who lie. Those nabobs. I hate them. I do hate them.
Oh shite. Now I'm really splitting in two. Hah! LOL! Odoylum's jewels!
zzinnia66 - Let's make that (POEM)