foggy shifty pity..neon halos read "late night mouse trap saves turn coat" i hate angels..they are mute 5/10

What do you mean, "smacks of Tron?" It's practically an explicit reference to 2001. Isn't it?

No you're not. Lying won't get you anywhere in life, young man.

Did you hear that, guys?! yoda's apprentice isn't going to vote for this poem! That's how bad it is!! Golly gosh!

This is bollocks of the worst possible kind. STOP. WRITING. TEENAGE. ANGST. POETRY. THAT. IS. EXACTLY THE SAME AS EVERY OTHER TEENAGE ANGST POETRY EVER WRITTEN. IT DOES NOT INTEREST ANYONE. YOU ARE WASTING YOUR TIME AND ALSO THE TIME OF ANYONE WHO READS YOUR POEM. I'M SURE YOUR EMOTIONS ARE HEARTFELT AND REAL AND TRUE. HOWEVER, THAT DOES NOT MAKE THEM WORTHY OF POETRY. YOU ARE NOT UNIQUE. YOU ARE NOT SPECIAL. THE SOONER YOU CEASE LABOURING UNDER THAT MISCONCEPTION THE SOONER YOU WILL BE ABLE TO PRODUCE STOMACHABLE POETRY.

cool name.unique style.three act play.you do own the sky. <this vote brought to you by datura the true potion of invisibility, recomended by shamans world round, and zipless the pants that control your bladder> i love this piece i will hang it on my wall..it wins the horus8 PRIZE FOR HOW TO DO IT RIGHT WITH YOUR LEFT award for late night readers..killere

this wins the horus8 RIDDLE HE COULDN'T FIGURE OUT AWARD..wow..this is some heavy shit..or is light..is it salt water..mold..silver..a gun powder ingredient..black ice, fuck..you're going to drive me fucking nuts..WAKE UP TELL ME..please.....10/10 you're mojo could wake up morisson..

david who? just joshing..big strange comparisons make my head swim with sharks. i like humus though..7/10-

bast agrees..8/10 prose are best horse radished and chewed well.

V good. 8. I am a cat man myself, but bias apart, a very worthwhile effort.

Smacks of Tron to me. 4. Still, there's something there...

I like the sentiments and feelings that you're trying to express in the poem. 6. I just don't think you do it very well. Developing a bigger vocabulary may help.

I'm a fool for rhetorical questioning! 9. The poem is accessible but deep. Nice choice of words and images.

I think you succeed in creating a sniping mood and a sense of biting rhythm. 6.

Can you not see that -=Dark_Angel=-'s comment on your other poeme was the apex of irony?

i dont give a shit if you like this poem cause the fact is this poem was in the top 15 best poems therefore your opinion means fuck all to me because you are a but fucking dick sucking poor ass poem writer good day to you sir! p.s have any of your poems been in the top 15 i think not!

oh shut the fuck up this poem is so bad im not even going to vote for it!

You stupid, stupid cunt. God, how I wish you would wake up with a red-hot iron on your face. I'm going to tell you something that, while it is relatively obvious, you seem not to be aware of. THE FACT THAT SOME PEOPLE LIKED YOUR POEM DOES NOT MEAN IT IS GOOD. A lot of people like Britney Spears. As far as I know, she is the #1 pop act in the US right now, or at least very close to #1. Does that make her good? No. Of course it fucking doesn't. So why does the opinion of a few people make your poem good? No, wait, I understand. The people who dislike your poems are "stupid" because they "don't get it", and "other people liked it", so they can go "fuck themselves". Do you realise how pathetic that sounds? When someone uses something's popularity as the basis for their argument for its goodness, you know they're desperate. If 90% of the people on this site said your poems were awful, you would insist "No, I'm right, you're wrong, you don't understand, my poems are good, you can go fuck yourself". You are a talentless dickwad. You have no sense of what poetry is, and you never will. It's not that I don't like your style. It's not that I don't like your subject matter, or your choice of words, or your inability to spell/capitalise/punctuate properly. It's that you are completely devoid of any saving graces at all, and your poems suck ass. Now, I fully expect you to counter with "what the fuck do you think your talking about 15 of your poems are in the worst section go fuck youreself", so let me remind you that 90% of the time, 90% of people are full of shit. More relevantly, the poems of mine that are in the worst section are not, I repeat, ARE NOT, supposed to garner praise and cryptic declarations of poetic orgasm. They are supposed to do a particular thing, and the fact that they are in the worst section is a clue that they have succeeded (No, it's not "offend people", just in case your little brain was jumping up and down in excitement at having worked something out). Now look here, cumbreath. You have as much a "right" to continue posting poetry as anyone else. But in exchange for that right, you must concede them the right to criticise it. And to respond to ANY criticism with "No, that criticism is wrong, because other people have praised it" is to miss the point of what criticism is. It is an opinion. Opinions may be more or less rational, but, especially in the case of poetry, you can't say that people's opinions are "wrong". Except yours. Your opinions are wrong.

i guess..sleep well poetess.b

This is just runny, poorly-applied eyeliner, a black t-shirt for that "mall-goth" effect and a 16-year-old screaming at her parents about how "no one understands". Bah.