New Life Drug
on Dream Dead by New Life Drug
9 Aug 2002, 5:30 PM
I'm a vegetarian. HA
nobody eats sherbert anymore
This has merit, much as yesterdays newspaper. (when one has run out of course!)
nostradomus was a young man once also... with quatrains he saw submarines and zepplins, but alas i only saw sulphuric smoke noxious gas at delphi, no oracle..no ariels only fuel.. everything fuel..yes fuel
holy fucking shit that is twice as good as acid and free. i will do that again then move on. your imagery is really supernatural divine saline.. quite rare. the title is what kicks the fence down. wow.fuck!e
it will never stop flipping back over on itself...flopping back over onto me.??
lol! i will smoke a fatty and agree..what a riot!l
good grief, clean up in aisle three please.
dreadnought.passion.pelvis.elvis.keebler cookies.
they have yet to bestow me with my well deserved laureateship...i must not slip and fall on top of the deans wife again..i am so close to nothing now that i can almost disengage machismo..no no no ..suck it in father i have sinned i have sinned by ending up just like you..thank you pharmaceutical boy (otep) for your kind words, but my father flannigan is beyond all perdition..we can never forgive him, but i must forgive myself..yes and touch the oil to my head and make the sign of the cross...yes oil..my head..the cross..the.....good boy smiles fangs and grows nails to perch to roost to phallic the name of.-----.shhhhhhh. pray to gozerh
indeed...fix line three, and line nine (you'll see) now as for guns..guns are no fun my young gifted friend.our weapon is pen.
the only way to get through these nasty mental fixations is to do it in story form..acting all of this stuff out could crack mothers nice tile counter. let's behave. i give you an 8 for your hate, but please correct typos. or not it works well too just let them go and bother old people's eyes. god's speed. <brought to you by 'pumptor' the only way to add girth to a skinny member, and 'white in' the paper, that corrects itself. good afternoon..c
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. mirror mirror on the wall who hath scribed in my bathroom stall.the mAster of qoutes except for two.the first and second line are all that's true! the rest is only entrails, and baba yaga's vagina hail. my kale gun has been drawn! stand fast for a calcium rich blast.l
i wanted to give you a ten, but then your overall score would have sky rocketed.this is a pure crack in your skull.. truly..i see too much light for your age..i must humble you..i must humble myself..do i have to be a redmark too? yes, i think i do..(this little diddy is fuckingkiller) you win the HORUS 8 TEN THAT GOT A ZERO FOR NO GOOD REASON AWARD CUZ ITS TOO GOOD ..don't worry others will come and bring much fruit to your alter, and i predict this will be on the top fifteen list before any of mine(honestly i don't pay attention, really) trust me..i am a ranc-amateur with hardly any real grasp of creative writing, but fuckin aye i can clam like a mad man. this is a wonderfull poem???
Way.Say.Otay.May.Filet.Ray.Bay.LayFray.P
(Perhaps)(Nothing beautiful is beautiful)
if you can thrill your patience stubar, then you my friend are hired...yes hired indeed!
i enjoy your writing, and the simple ones too. you have impeccable taste. with a well rounded structue. pregnant yet starving.......i ring my bell for another! another, and another i am a poet you are a writer. we are both readers...yes we read...i need to read..you write well..your beak is a fine ceramic your hoof is sure footed...write to live!??
one of the dumbest things i've ever read. not even worthy of a vote really, but i'm going to in hopes it will lower your score even further. technically i shouldn't vote a 1 because at least you wrote something, but no, it sucks too bad to even be 'something'. congrats on being the holder of the 3 worst poems though!