razorgrin
on I like Cake by skaskowski
10 Aug 2002, 5:54 AM
I eat sherbert all the time.It's yummy.
what a rubbish poeme
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2002, 9:16 PM
Please check your spelling.
hm.. I want a little more out of this story (story; I don't see any poem about this other than the linebreaks every couple of words).
Yeah cheers mate! Nice one, livingcanvas! Congrats on being a top notch dullard!
laughably awful... "The ocean waves do not crash or miss a beat"... what is that supposed to mean? What ocean? Why should ocean waves 'beat'? Is it because 'beat' rhymes with 'feet'? Why should they stop crashing? So what if they do stop crashing? Why do you smell? Is it because you haven't wiped? Is this poeme the 'epitome' of your bum? Why doesn't Jesu feature in any of your poemes? Don't you believe in Jesu? Why not?
go to hell and fuckin die. Your writing is the epitome of shit if you havent noticed. You wanna know why i dont write about jesus? I would much rather read about him and tell others about him than just simply write about him.
Why not do all three? poemeranker is a great place to meet other Christians and share in fellowship and prayer.
P.S I'll thank you to write 'Him' rather than 'him' when referring to Jesus of Nazareth.
.life don't suck,it blows,from stranger quarters than you can possibly know ; self pity doesn't do it , wait a few years til you pity the world then top yourself because of guilt... anyhow, what happened ?
you have some serious issues man
you have some serious problems maybe you should see a therapist
you have serious problems perhaps you should see a therapist
nice title, nice concept, shitty poem!
your begging for it angel-you should'nt have written this poem, and yes, no one cares!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2002, 7:43 PM
good god! i can only hope this is a joke.
so what!
.... would be good if it meant something ...