Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	edpeterson 68.79.52.31	9-Mar-05/4:16 PM
of a tractor's or of tractors'
Re: Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	the_poetess 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/4:29 PM
alot of your work tends to be good but it is extremely long and exhausting to read - might i suggest making it a bit shorter - it would be more effective and i bet more people would read it -emili
regarding some deleted poem...	nentwined 64.60.192.130	9-Mar-05/2:51 PM
A lot of things there you say are true that I could argue with. I suppose you don't miss me, then. forced rhymes and erratic rhythm are painful to me.
Re: Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom	nentwined 64.60.192.130	9-Mar-05/2:55 PM
cute. the beginning was a bit commonplace, and the middle dragged; the ending then felt rushed. I suppose the main complaint is that this is a laundry list, and those are nearly impossible to give substance too, even when this is entirely a story as well. I think you rely too much on the form, here.
regarding some deleted poem...	the_poetess 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/4:36 PM
ah, but have you yet considered the chance that history man never see you, how many people have you heard from 18th century france, or 11th century africa exactly
Re: A Nation by the_poetess	nentwined 64.60.192.130	9-Mar-05/3:03 PM
Definitely one of your better posts; I'd cut it after "Vesuvius". I think it would be rather good if you cut it after "Vesuvius", actually. :)
Re: Infatuation by noonewantstobealone	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:38 PM
1) if it is on a site called poemranker.com why would you post that which is not a poem 2) it definetly sounds like a poetic attempt, I'm not quite sure how well you suceeded by it sounds like a poem to me 3) it was a good effort and I will acknowledge that so often the words to describe what we feel escape us and we almost always come up short in trying to describe both the happy and the poignant 4) all that aside i don't really care for this that much i give it a 6 -zarina
Re: Revolution by Nitroxide	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:43 PM
i like the intention but, i dont think we will ever have a Utopia, at least not one this earth, things can get better but they wont change, until people do and people haven't changed that much at all since the time of the grecians, thats 2000+ years of human nature working against you it would be nice though (the utopia) -zarina
Re: Some Things by Christof	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:44 PM
i like this i do - but one comment - be more specific when you say she - it was a little confusing at times as to whether you were discussing the librarian or the girl....... -zarina
Re: Nitro by NNirvana13666	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:49 PM
a tad to cliche to be really good -zarina
Re: with no words to write by nentwined	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:52 PM
i really really like this! -zarina
Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:53 PM
i might like this better if i didnt have a strong distaste for rhyme -zarina
Re: don't know by the_poetess	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	9-Mar-05/3:56 PM
Why don't you?
Re: untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote	crooked_smile 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:58 PM
i really like this.......... -lia
Re: My days work by lucky_cmc	crooked_smile 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/4:00 PM
um, this was not, to be frank, very good a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special 2)it was rather bland and run of the mill -lia
Re: oops by jay_dace	crooked_smile 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/4:01 PM
nice but it would be that much stronger if you took off the "i think" tell us, don't speculate! without that it would be a 5 with that change more of a 9 ill meet you in the middle and give you a 7 -lia
Re: The Snow Globe by Caducus	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67	10-Mar-05/5:48 AM
Other than her mascara (flowing). This rocks.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67	10-Mar-05/5:53 AM
If the newbies read stuff like this,-and think about it or read twice before commenting- we might see some effort from them.
Re: To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT	nentwined 64.60.192.130	10-Mar-05/10:21 AM
It's->Its (confused me first read) Interesting, though. Not gelling for me.
Re: bleeding by crooked_smile	frdup717 65.32.226.123	9-Mar-05/5:33 PM
cheerful (10) (on a happire note my poem ALONE was published!!!!!!!yay!!!!!!!!0