Re: For China by Fear of Garbage	JoyLuck 65.60.139.26	7-Mar-05/6:48 PM
i just wanna say... CHINA!!!!!!
Re: a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle	some deleted user 24.224.192.56	7-Mar-05/5:51 PM
I disagree that the foetus should have its day in court.
Re: Thundershowers and my best friend by NeeMan	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/5:53 PM
i absolutely love this 100%! - 10 - -megan
Re: Evacuation harnessed angel Vs. The antichrist by Bachus	nentwined 64.60.192.130	7-Mar-05/4:39 PM
Hmm. I gave this a 6 back in the day. Today I give it a 10. It made me laugh.
regarding some deleted poem...	nentwined 64.60.192.130	7-Mar-05/4:44 PM
"has he took my place"? The forced rhymes and rhythm turn me off entirely. Sorry. A poem only a (your?) father could love? I feel like you must have gone down the medicrity checklist to pull this off. I'll have to read more of your stuff to see if this is typical. I didn't expect it of you, though I can't remember where my expectation came from.
Re: Bugs by INTRANSIT	nentwined 64.60.192.130	7-Mar-05/4:46 PM
monochrome doesn't seem right. sepia? I like where it starts. The ending doesn't cinch it closed for me, though.
Re: The Snow Globe by Caducus	nentwined 64.60.192.130	7-Mar-05/4:49 PM
I like bits of this a lot. The last stanza really doesn't work for me. The underscores in the title bug me. Dunno. 6. could be something, though.
Re: For China by Fear of Garbage	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/5:32 PM
intersting - i dont really get it though - megan
Re: A Sonnet for Barbara by PatColvin	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/5:46 PM
it is nice as a poem for your wife, but noone else, its rhymes are unimaginative and weak, and it doesnt have a lot of appeal -- sonnets are ahrd though so ill give you a 5 for effort -
Re: Come home by phbiscuit	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/6:02 PM
this was really good but just a tad too "sugary" - 8 - -megan
Re: The Privaleged by i_am_the_popsicle	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	7-Mar-05/5:45 PM
It's interesting that suicide tends to be more prevalent during peace time. Having an enemy to fight against seems to give people a sense of purpose, and while they're busy gouging out his eyes, or stamping on his balls, Kurt Cobain is merely a whining gnat on the buttocks of their subconscious.
regarding some deleted poem...	JoyLuck 65.60.139.26	7-Mar-05/6:51 PM
Sometimes I feel, dan garcia-black, that i am a man trapped inside a woman's body who herself feels as if she is trapped inside a turnips exterior.
regarding some deleted poem...	JoyLuck 65.60.139.26	7-Mar-05/6:52 PM
fire in the hole
Re: A Prayer by that_funny_girl	JoyLuck 65.60.139.26	7-Mar-05/6:54 PM
god doesn't exist but santa claus does what does this prove?
Re: exercise by JoyLuck	RION12 64.136.26.226	7-Mar-05/7:01 PM
Cool. I like the way you make everything sound so simple. I like that kind of stuff in poems. I rate this poem and poet a 10.
Re: wishes by the_poetess	JoyLuck 65.60.139.26	7-Mar-05/7:03 PM
i usually wait for the signal to clear on the porno channel so i could view some boobies, but hey...look at peacocks
Re: Snow Sucks by JoyLuck	RION12 64.136.26.226	7-Mar-05/7:06 PM
Snow does suck. That sucks and good poem. I rate it a 8.
Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL	RION12 64.136.26.226	7-Mar-05/7:11 PM
What is the point to this poem?
Re: wishes by the_poetess	RION12 64.136.26.226	7-Mar-05/7:17 PM
I know what you mean. I want something crazy to happen. That's way when I get the chance I go eggbomb my school. That is so much fucken fun and it's even better when my friends come with me. We fuck my school up.
Re: The Chocolat Box by Samantha	the_poetess 205.188.116.135	7-Mar-05/7:26 PM
um this was weak at best, and only managed to work at all because it was supported by an outside quote - 5 -