Re: Pillow Talk by horus8	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.199	16-Feb-05/12:18 AM
May I count to 100 by -10-'s?
Re: Pillow Talk by horus8	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Feb-05/5:37 AM
I always feel like I have just had an anal douche and forgot to shut my mouth when I read your poemes. -1-0-
Re: Little Fly by PodPoet	PodPoet 66.192.2.2	15-Feb-05/5:30 PM
Dovina and Dar_Angel: Thanks much for your nice comments. Dovina, you're right, this shouldn't be "Concrete." I was a little confused over all the categories, but now I understand. However, I can't change it without losing the current comments/votes, so it'll have to stay as such for now. Thanks again for the reviews.
Re: The Man I Love by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.199	16-Feb-05/12:10 AM
This poem is sweeter than Splenda.-10-
Re: Insanity by Lifeboatman	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.199	16-Feb-05/12:14 AM
As a man trapped in a woman's body, I must confess that you are right. -10-
Re: Piercings by PsydewaysTears	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.199	16-Feb-05/12:27 AM
I liked the concept and the twist at the end. Some rhymes could have been a bit "weirder" in keeping with the subject, for example: Some people pierce "down under" below the waist; above the knees. Wait a minute! Does that make it sound like an Australian piercing? Your poem works for me. -9-
Re: Garage sale by INTRANSIT	Dovina 12.72.2.151	16-Feb-05/9:02 PM
I'll give fifty cents for the scenery and because most of tha ants are sick.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Feb-05/5:39 AM
A trampled on sperm-splat.
Re: Hard Month by wlshepherd	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Feb-05/5:42 AM
This is appalling. To think of the rain dog shivering and the some snow cold bird, really evokes massive feelings of having just gargled with Sperm.
Re: ~RePOST~Cupid's Arrow <----<< by nothingtoanyone	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Feb-05/5:52 AM
Either I am being jolly dim and don't understand your emittence, giving me the intellgence of a sqeaky parp compared to your large voiding of follow through, or your poem was a colossal waste of time both to write and to read. On the plus side I really like the use of spacing.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Feb-05/7:09 AM
The Homo Lord poeme To make this you will require: One gay A computer Internet access Appalling adjectives Turgid imagery A 0
Re: Suicide..... by *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.*	some deleted user 216.135.39.196	16-Feb-05/2:31 PM
Thats a hardcore poem baby!!!Are you really this depressed and if so why?It makes me sad to think how lonely you must be!Thank you very much for voting and reading my poem and your poem was very good also,your rhyming skills very good!! Your Friend,Peekster!!
Re: A Sinner’s Prayer by Dovina	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67	16-Feb-05/2:59 PM
Howdy, D. Nice beat here. A serious answer to your question of why I left: I think my poetry sucks. No kidding. I'm just not measuring up to what I expect of myself. And now back to our regularly scheduled silliness: I left because, in high school, I didn't get the safety program that went: Bill got mixed up with the wrong internet crowd. He wants to try poetry. Careful, Bill, it's difficult. No, Bill, you can't spondee! You'll hurt yourself! Too bad for Bill. No, I get the one: Bill wants to try Rachmaninoff. Ok. I didn't get that one, but I did get the one that goes: Bill wants to try Air-traffic-control. Well, you can see where that led to.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.3.225	16-Feb-05/3:01 PM
Your switch to the first person in the last line is distracting. Otherwise vivid.
Re: Little Fly by PodPoet	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67	16-Feb-05/3:04 PM
Kooky.
Re: Lent Begins by jessicazee	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67	16-Feb-05/3:35 PM
Yes JZ. Cruise control.
Re: A Sinner’s Prayer by Dovina	horus8 24.130.62.63	16-Feb-05/3:37 PM
If you grovel for me, I'll tell you where god lives. So that you might send him a more refined query.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	16-Feb-05/3:42 PM
That, or you're near-sighted.
Re: ~RePOST~Cupid's Arrow <----<< by nothingtoanyone	horus8 24.130.62.63	16-Feb-05/3:43 PM
Kindly stow it.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	16-Feb-05/3:44 PM
What a lovely sack of fuck.