regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	17-Feb-05/5:40 PM
Definitely one of your best in a while.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Feb-05/4:43 AM
In all seriousness, if you weren't so always, "If you want, take all of me; I give it freely" you'd probably get more. PS-Don't reply, '*glum* I guess, But I can't help being who I am'. I know.
Re: Garage sale by INTRANSIT	nentwined 64.81.38.95	16-Feb-05/11:00 PM
:HEH: very cute. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Feb-05/4:44 AM
Have you ever actually fucked? I mean, outside your imagination? It's really not that worth dying over. At least, with me it's not.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Feb-05/4:32 AM
Close to Uranus (Free verse) by Caducus ... Oh, forget it.
Re: A Sinner’s Prayer by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Feb-05/4:24 AM
Q: Do you think God reads your poems? Q2: Do you think God pays more attention to your poems than he does to, say, the Sri Lankan praying 'O God please whatever you do don't send a tidal wave anytime soon, see I just bought this new car and it's a Hyundai with leather interior standard etc etc etc'? Q3: You're a Christian. I know this isn't a question. If you just admitted you were a Christian, you'd be happier maybe, but probably not. Q4: Dear me, your 8 months on poemranker have put you on the side of - preaching - didacticism - illogics forcibly repeated in the face of uncomfortable reason - telling not showing - flagrant cronyism - affirmative action - racists - misspelling - more illogic - and God. Are you George W. Bush?
Re: Lent Begins by jessicazee	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Feb-05/4:34 AM
This was better before.
Re: Little Fly by PodPoet	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Feb-05/4:41 AM
Dear Christ. So my wife works in this town called Ghwor, on the site of Sodom and Gomorrah in modern-day Jordan, and says the flies there are so nuts it's worse than Somalian starving baby footage, but what do you expect, most of the townfolk (10% born disabled) squat over a hole in the kitchen floor to go to the bathroom? So anyway, last week they all got Typhoid there, I mean like all of them, and Jesus Christ - Typhoid! Like I didn't even know that disease existed anymore. Anyway I just wanted to tell you I'm with -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I., flies are exactly what we need more of here, and a great way to capture the image of a kinda humming, eyeitching, omnipresent love sent from above. You get my only heartfelt 10 of the day. Enjoy!
Re: Lets recreate hell real properly by Crakyamuni	wilco 24.165.207.93	17-Feb-05/5:47 PM
I like the last three lines and the part about the ghost. the part in the middle you might could work on though.
Re: ~RePOST~Cupid's Arrow <----<< by nothingtoanyone	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Feb-05/4:49 AM
Complete the following sentences: 1) Old Shakespeary kinds of poems are _______________ 2) I have read ___ Shakespeary poems.
Re: No Name by hatedestruction	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Feb-05/4:51 AM
Has anyone but you bothered to read or listen to this all the way to the end? -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	17-Feb-05/7:38 PM
Ok, I laughed my ass off at this.
regarding some deleted poem...	Crakyamuni 131.252.181.231	17-Feb-05/5:56 PM
I gave this a ten because I paint to near psychosis sometimes. There lies a sort of prison in artwork, especially when it becomes a true compulsion. Sometimes I want to escape this and learn to live again, socialize, bend to cultural standards. But I find that world, the cultural death, to be nauseating. This poem addresses some of my own issues with true "representation" of life, love, and lonliness. Those three L's sometimes divert from one another so much, I feel that I will lose everything, gaining nothing in the form of knowledge. A slow death in pre-determined esthetic value is my latest fear; raising a question of wether one is philosophically bound, when displaying talent, to searching for new and genuine methods. But what about love? What about love.
Re: a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove	oneglove 205.133.194.49	17-Feb-05/6:58 AM
sorry zodiac i was clicking on the reply link and i accidently hit the "x", thanks for your correction of my word choice, i'm prone to small mistakes like that, i'd appreciate your full critique if you want to take the time.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.33.108	17-Feb-05/7:51 AM
Pretty good really. Overwritten, I thought at first, but no, pretty good.
Re: A Sinner’s Prayer by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.204	17-Feb-05/3:31 PM
Hey! is it Ok for a brother to leave a comment? I don't wanna leave no icing (smile)
Re: PG Naughty by Miggy	Dovina 12.72.10.99	17-Feb-05/4:37 PM
Disgusting. An 8 for the writing, 0 for doing it.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.10.99	17-Feb-05/4:41 PM
Perhaps your best. At least I get it and think I might have lived it. Some folks don't want to see anything but their paintings.
Re: Garage sale by INTRANSIT	wilco 24.165.207.93	17-Feb-05/5:33 PM
Pretty good. Glad to have you back.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.6.182	17-Feb-05/9:33 PM
I'm not laughing because loving onesself is an essential prerequisite to loving another. I'm convinced of it. Few poets could say it as well.