Re: Recognition by nentwined	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/10:46 PM
trust**
Re: One-Man Act by Blindpoetry	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/10:53 PM
Nah, I don't really like it. Doesn't flow too well and not too poetic either. A 4 for your efforts though.
Re: A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/10:31 PM
Okay, a bit cheesy but nice work!! Just the rhyme needs a little more work. You start with abcb and end up with aaaa. Anyways, hanks for reading mine. I've posted a new one too. Look at it if you have the chance.
Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/10:57 PM
I found the "THOU" thing pretty unnecessary as you really don't follow it up in the other cases. I won't say I hate but don't love it either. A 5!!
regarding some deleted poem...	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/10:39 PM
A very heart-felt dedication but a chest-nut nevertheless. You could have done better to avoid cliches. Anyways, a 6 from me and I hope you'd check me out too.
Re: Recognition by nentwined	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/10:44 PM
I can't get you. Either I am intellectually challenged or this is crap. I rust your abilities, so I settle for the former conclusion. Do check me out. A 5 as a benefit of doubt!!
Re: The Drop by auscot	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/10:45 PM
What more do you need than commendation?? Not very hilarious bu a decent read.
Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:03 PM
The rhyme seems forced. You could have just written that in a free verse and expressed yourself better. Good effort since it's a Villanelle (They are hard, I admit) but not exactly classy!!
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:06 PM
A very immatured piece and nothing poetic whatsoever.
Re: keep on digging by nentwined	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:11 PM
The first 2 lines rhyme while the later 3 donot. Don't you think the initial rhyme was unnecessary??
Re: Remembrance by dragonfly	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:18 PM
I feel nostalgic too in a queer way!!! Nice work
regarding some deleted poem...	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:23 PM
Powerfully expressed but the flow breaks here and there. Breaks out of the "Mediocre" tag but not all that classy either.
Re: Joanna by DR Limerick	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:26 PM
This is ot a limerick. A limerick consists of 5 lines and has the rhyme scheme of aabba. Joanna and Spanners don't rhyme and this has only 3 lines. Not funny either. A 1.
Re: Interstellar Hell by PsydewaysTears	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:29 PM
Nice work. Above the "Average".
Re: Andrew part II by Spindle	some deleted user 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:31 PM
Absolute chestnut!!
Re: the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL?	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	21-Dec-04/11:43 PM
that makes you go insain... It's spelled INSANE. either way im bringin you pain...Spelled BRINGING and its all for my ...Spelled IT'S or IT IS. Below average...a 3!!
Re: What is that I seek again? by Bhaskaryya	horus8 24.130.62.63	22-Dec-04/1:16 AM
A cliche homerun of shit. Talk about forced rhyme? What about forced plain old Bad droll writing? This Is a plate full of nut sack.
Re: Sidestepping Stupor by PsydewaysTears	horus8 24.130.62.63	22-Dec-04/1:19 AM
Nicely done.
Re: The Wandering Jew by Lifeboatman	horus8 24.130.62.63	22-Dec-04/1:27 AM
lol, yep
Re: Impatience always backfires 913 by notule	horus8 24.130.62.63	22-Dec-04/1:31 AM
Flucked