regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	7-Dec-04/5:26 PM
Why the ' after boxes? "bone wheel" is a stretch, isn't it? the last line reminds of my recent "The Rockets' Song" Thinking of the vererans. Maybe a period after boxes, then "Each wheel clicks . . ."
Re: Black by WithoutLife	blacksoul 204.215.34.148	8-Dec-04/4:24 AM
Very touching
Re: The ABC's Of Adultery by horus8	Stacy Stewart 208.20.95.32	8-Dec-04/4:33 AM
Finally ending in the the ABC's of Divorce.
Re: Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart	Stacy Stewart 208.20.95.32	8-Dec-04/5:18 AM
My own version of: MUSIC SWIMS BACK TO ME By: Anne Sexton.
Re: Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer	Stacy Stewart 208.20.95.32	8-Dec-04/7:26 AM
Aahh I'm going through this right now: Believes HE can seduce me with a dance Clings to me and purrs and ultimately fails. To put it bluntly it this poem was a car your transmission just slipped. Overall I thought this poem was lacking in rhythm.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bluemonkey 170.141.68.99	8-Dec-04/10:08 AM
You never cease to amaze. Always striving to reach new levels of ignorance.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 17.255.240.138	8-Dec-04/10:27 AM
Answer: There's little difference. How does this deconstruct religion or even challenge it?
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.20.71	8-Dec-04/10:51 AM
A parp; yet only a parp.
Re: america The Beautiful by Stacy Stewart	hendrimike 64.12.116.67	7-Dec-04/7:46 PM
amen!
Re: A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot	keatsImnot 80.5.160.5	8-Dec-04/2:18 PM
Dark Angel Thanks for the encouraging words it's much appreciated 10 is quite some score.
Re: A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot	keatsImnot 80.5.160.5	8-Dec-04/2:20 PM
Dovina Is that a Michael Jackson Bad.
Re: Dreams of Neverland: Invitation to Neverland by TLRufener	jessicazee 64.12.116.135	8-Dec-04/11:10 PM
I like this enough to spend a little time with nitpicking... A few comments: (as I read it out loud): Line 10: omit "the scent of" - better w/out it Line 11: Just "cast", not "casted" Paragraph break after line 14 ..."balcony." Line 15: "Gazed in awe" is kind of cliche-y. Line 18: He already gave you his hand a few lines back. Line 27: "thought" instead of "though", ok... Sorry to analyze too much ..guess I kind of like the fantastical aspect of this poem. Like I like the movie "Willow". Or "The Neverending Story." But not the "Neverending Story Part II." That may have sucked worse than "Grease 2" with Michelle Pfeiffer.
regarding some deleted poem...	jessicazee 64.12.116.135	8-Dec-04/11:12 PM
Omigod I am an only child but now I think I might have a sister.
regarding some deleted poem...	jessicazee 64.12.116.135	8-Dec-04/11:18 PM
OK now, I have to pipe in... 1st stanza is brilliant... I want to help stanza 2 somehow... with less words? More subtlety? ...but love the line about troglodytes... also, please tell me, if anyone, where "Tycross Zoo" is? Danke schon.
Re: Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart	jessicazee 64.12.116.135	8-Dec-04/11:20 PM
A little confusing point-of view-wise but I am into it big time anyways?
Re: Recognition by nentwined	zodiac 212.118.14.17	9-Dec-04/6:05 AM
I'm compiling a list of things nentwined was probably doing with -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I.'s $1 instead of server maintenance during the week poemranker was down. Freely contribute.
Re: delete my account: ode to poem ranker by fuzzylogic	fuzzylogicisatwat 213.146.148.199	9-Dec-04/7:06 AM
What the fuck have you got as grounds for misuse? this is a rating website, so you're a colossal twat, get over yourself cocknose. I can see it now fuzzylogic(plaintiff) versus the world - reason for the case, people called me names on a website, Christ's wet nappy you're a snivelling lump of stale shoe butter.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	9-Dec-04/2:17 PM
Ok. this is the first poem that shows AND tells. Integrate the first half with the second. That's a metafor I've never seen bephor. Short circuited until fixed.
Re: Matthew's Bastard by Caducus	Bobjim 195.93.33.11	9-Dec-04/3:33 PM
1The name was interesting, but it was too long to read properly.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	9-Dec-04/4:27 PM
Do you really mean, “I would be once more the man in which you had fallen in love.”? If you like the ambiguity, change only “which” to “whom.” “Ready to take its place.”