Re: Limbs by Dovina	Bobjim 172.189.0.164	10-Dec-04/5:14 PM
weird
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Re: Going Camping by jessicazee	Dovina 69.175.6.101	10-Dec-04/5:21 PM
The first three verses great. And the mulberry tree lines are good - seem to complete the moth lines. But in between, well, why?
Re: Relativity by Bobjim	Dovina 69.175.6.101	10-Dec-04/5:29 PM
The first six lines are good, but Einstein's Relativity is not "like" these things.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	9-Dec-04/4:39 PM
'someone else could.' "porkpie hat"?
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	9-Dec-04/4:40 PM
Mathematically, Brownian motion is a Wiener process.
Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.6.101	9-Dec-04/4:56 PM
Quite good.
Re: Love by RION12	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.76	10-Dec-04/8:36 AM
Love is a dog from hell- Charles Bukowski. Love is a live dog in a Korean kitchen (non-existent)-Dan garcia-Black
Re: Limbs by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.76	10-Dec-04/8:50 AM
Are you the lightning, the oak or the result of the meeting of the two? I like being the moss on the North side never seeing the sun. The lightning was bright. It was fun to watch.
regarding some deleted poem...	boldsilence 204.196.232.62	10-Dec-04/10:24 AM
Great imagery! Sounds like a love poem to me though...
Re: Love by RION12	Dovina 69.175.6.101	10-Dec-04/10:28 AM
Your usual Poemranker therapists are out today. Perhaps the above canines and this will help. By the time you understand love, it may no longer interest you.
Re: Dreams of Neverland: Invitation to Neverland by TLRufener	Dovina 69.175.6.101	10-Dec-04/11:58 AM
A delightful fancy that seem calling for meter, even rhyme. I'd sacrifice rhyme though for a steady rhythm.
Re: Limbs by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	10-Dec-04/4:14 PM
What a squalid and ignoble dunce cap, on a poetic career of steadily diminishing returns. -10-
Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	SupremeDreamer 65.45.152.4	11-Dec-04/4:41 AM
Yes, I like this piece too Intransit, my ol' companion, but there is an issue which bothers me: potently... "portently" Is not a word, atleast according to my dictionary, so I believe it's "potently" that you wished to utilize in the poem. That aside, I bless thee with nine. Go In Peace Brother...
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 65.45.152.4	11-Dec-04/4:42 AM
A masterpiece. Ten.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 65.45.152.4	11-Dec-04/4:46 AM
Solid work. Nine. Go In Peace.
Re: MONSOON by rrashi	Dovina 69.175.6.101	10-Dec-04/6:19 PM
Better than your last. I've never felt a monsoon, but almost can. Could do without "The most poignant pictures it brings," Check punctuation and grammar in the last 4 lines.
regarding some deleted poem...	jessicazee 205.188.116.135	11-Dec-04/12:47 AM
I liked this enough to read it twice. Which is good, as I clearly have adult ADD. Two suggestions: 1. The second "trying" from line 5 to 6 is redundant. More powerful once. 2. A few more line breaks would help break it up a bit and give it more punch. Good effort. 7.9
Re: Limbs by Dovina	richa 81.178.245.106	11-Dec-04/3:40 AM
The language acquisition device in your brain seems to have horribly dysfunctioned. These are not sentences.
Re: Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart	richa 81.178.245.106	11-Dec-04/3:47 AM
Needs quotation marks around the first two lines or the poem looks like some misguided tense experiment.