Re: Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart	SupremeDreamer 65.45.152.4	11-Dec-04/4:51 AM
Good concept, mostly well done-- though I think it could be shortened a bit. Blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	11-Dec-04/3:48 PM
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Re: I Have... by SupremeDreamer	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	11-Dec-04/5:32 AM
You always were one for 'going solo', but I never thought you'd actually pay homage to the virtues of self-stimulation in quite so public an arena. For that, sir, you are to be savagely mocked beyond thunderdome. Good day.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	11-Dec-04/12:02 PM
Better
Re: Where's Jeremi B. Handrinos? by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	11-Dec-04/12:05 PM
Brilliant, you really do your homework. I like cock.
Re: Are You Experienced? by EAger to Offend	EAger to Offend 65.95.241.26	12-Dec-04/2:26 AM
That is simply because you are not experienced. But for 5 bucks a hit... you could be.
Re: That One Time Last Summer, Remember? by jessicazee	EAger to Offend 65.95.241.26	12-Dec-04/3:18 AM
Inexplicibly good! I get a great feeling from this. Both intimate and delicate. 10
Re: Going Camping by jessicazee	EAger to Offend 65.95.241.26	12-Dec-04/3:21 AM
This is a good sketch for the poem that evolved from it.
Re: Tonight by jessicazee	EAger to Offend 65.95.241.26	12-Dec-04/3:28 AM
Wow! I can't understand the low scores on this one. Even when your writing is a little unhinged I find you establish a feeling. Maybe it's just because I'm a nature nut.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	11-Dec-04/8:18 PM
This is probably the worst poem you've written, but I'm saying that loosely. I was wondering why I was reading it by line two.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	11-Dec-04/8:21 PM
I have no idea why I like your poetry, but that's a plus.
Re: At Sunset by Bobjim	horus8 24.130.62.63	11-Dec-04/8:45 PM
You hit every cliche known to man like a homerun of shit. Good one, somehow you pulled it off.
Re: Limbs by Dovina	blacksoul 204.215.33.19	12-Dec-04/3:39 AM
I always wanted to know how old was the oak trees that we had in our back yard were. -10-
Re: Things I Will Never Do by jessicazee	EAger to Offend 65.95.241.26	12-Dec-04/3:41 AM
Hilarious and serious???
Re: Los Angeles by Dovina	blacksoul 204.215.33.19	12-Dec-04/3:46 AM
My middle brother lives in Los Angles, and I went to visit him. so I can relate to what you are saying -10-
Re: Sea of Stagnation by DreamerSupreme	blacksoul 204.215.33.19	12-Dec-04/3:53 AM
I like this man! -10-
Re: Love Bruises by Jezabele-In-Hell	EAger to Offend 65.95.241.26	12-Dec-04/4:20 AM
The title and concept are great, actually. The poem is just a very raw explaination. Give us some imagery and try to work in some poetic devices. I think you have over-explained it in this version so please don't waste your time on trying to clarify the idea in later versions. Just make us feel the way you feel.
Re: Love Bruises by Jezabele-In-Hell	EAger to Offend 65.95.241.26	12-Dec-04/4:20 AM
The title and concept are great, actually. The poem is just a very raw explaination. Give us some imagery and try to work in some poetic devices. I think you have over-explained it in this version so please don't waste your time on trying to clarify the idea in later versions. Just make us feel the way you feel.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.138	12-Dec-04/5:11 AM
I believe that the goal of great poets should be to appeal to everyone equally. I hope this edit accomplishes that goal for this poem, my brothers in words.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.138	12-Dec-04/5:22 AM
Sounds like love is a game of penny-ante poker with God as the dealer and the queen trumps the king everytime.