Re: One Day I Will be Made of Electric Swords that Will Explode by T. Jonathron Remp	Bobjim 143.167.79.207	8-Nov-04/7:26 AM
Most excellent. Well deserving of a 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	cuddlytiger17 209.105.159.169	7-Nov-04/5:04 PM
Wonderful write.
Re: Daddy's Never There by angelmami17	angelmami17 64.12.116.67	7-Nov-04/9:41 PM
I wrote this poem when I was like 15 I think! If you couldn't tell it's a poem about my dad. I hope you like it!
Re: tomorrow is another day by hendrimike	edpeterson 68.79.60.123	6-Nov-04/9:09 AM
dude, i wish these went to 11!
Re: Geometry for Dyslexics by zodiac	Sasha 69.138.240.116	6-Nov-04/11:13 AM
Quite planar if I do say so myself. Adding the same thing to both sides of "tangled" like this has made me lean out to my shelf with parallel hands and take my textbook, spangled with blots and gum, has made me start the fire in my hearth early this year. You have made me take the deadened textbook to its pyre on logs and mourn it with the spark and spade. Thank God! I cremated my mathbook after I'd read this poem, though this poem meant as much as what it made me burn. The scent of smoke perfumes the rafters. I'm all laughter: A math-made poem is as out of whack as fortune-telling by the zodiac. though the last stanza or so was really really good and so was the beginning. But a lot of it was needlessly complex. Since I'm a dyslexic, (and no, you didn't "offend" me) this poem I guess missed its point. Though I must say that if it's a dyslexic joke, it's quite funny.
Re: Geometry for Dyslexics by zodiac	Bachus 24.130.62.63	7-Nov-04/11:35 PM
That was a mouthful of muscle.
Re: Sunrise by Aetius	tadpole 67.21.31.89	6-Nov-04/10:25 PM
It's almost like I'm there
Re: There Is No Such Thing As A Poem by Aetius	tadpole 67.21.31.89	6-Nov-04/10:29 PM
Nice poem! ;)
regarding some deleted poem...	hendrimike 64.12.116.135	7-Nov-04/11:12 AM
kick ass!
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.1.34	7-Nov-04/2:09 PM
A passage worth perusing again. I enjoyed this.
Re: leaping into loss by skaskowski	sliver 63.189.1.34	7-Nov-04/1:57 PM
At the mention of concrete, my perception changed right away. At first I imagined this in the mountains or something. Well written and profound. It has an interpretation all it's own for me.
Re: behind the mirror by skaskowski	sliver 63.189.1.34	7-Nov-04/2:01 PM
Been there!
Re: corrupting me by skaskowski	sliver 63.189.1.34	7-Nov-04/2:03 PM
ouch
Re: Beyond Love by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	8-Nov-04/5:52 AM
Are you getting any at the moment Dovina?
Re: pull by skaskowski	hendrimike 64.12.116.135	7-Nov-04/11:58 AM
ouch! that one hurts...
Re: scarecrow saviour by skaskowski	sliver 63.189.1.34	7-Nov-04/2:00 PM
WOW! guess I'm stuck here for a while. Well Done.
Re: take it easy by skaskowski	sliver 63.189.1.34	7-Nov-04/2:02 PM
Probably more worried about the transition.
Re: corrupting you by skaskowski	sliver 63.189.1.34	7-Nov-04/2:04 PM
Made me chuckle, actually.
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	8-Nov-04/2:24 AM
My negro made his escape, With a beard made of a Crepe, He didn't get far, For a distinguishing scar, I declared the season's most whimsical jape! My Jesus was bearded in milk, To distinguish him from his ilk, But it turned to cheese, As he died of disease, But the stilton tasted like silk. I bearded my Jesus with cricket, His face was a splendid wicket, A portable ground, With Tests' to astound, It soon cost a guinea a ticket! I bearded my Jesus with a brogue, To ensure he was en Vogue, The ladies fainted, To see footwear tainted, By my negro Jesus rogue!
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	8-Nov-04/6:48 AM
I can't wait for the Autumn 2002!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Have you ever watched andrea in the lockeroom and marvelled at what it must be like to have a pair of breasts?