regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	25-Sep-04/10:23 AM
Comparable in horrifying familiarity to the sensation of being raped by an out-of-control hobo in your own back garden.
Re: why there are no virgins by daggatolar	Sasha 69.138.240.116	25-Sep-04/10:49 AM
-7- For shock
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	capachijim 152.163.100.195	24-Sep-04/1:53 PM
with a score that high, i was a little more than skeptical, but this is great. It's like an epic and exaclty what poetry should be. It reminds me of famous poems that people spend their lives examining to find the meaning that was present all along. It's a 10, u deserve it :)
regarding some deleted poem...	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	24-Sep-04/4:47 AM
The vicars pictured below would disapprove most strongly of the sort of conduct you describe: http://tinyurl.com/4d6ab http://tinyurl.com/7ynve http://tinyurl.com/3pm9h
regarding some deleted poem...	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	24-Sep-04/4:48 AM
Quendocratic mush
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	Tintagiles 198.164.250.47	24-Sep-04/5:39 PM
For some reason I can't bring myself to think the last stanza fits. Though I love the 'Kissed her lips on the ashes of blossom'. For some reason it doesn't seem to work rhythmically. Also, while the whole wheel of time moving around, as was done before so shall be done again, etc theme works (i.e. you kissing your lover where your parents kissed etc.), it seems a touch clichéd. It makes me think too much of 'Songs my Mother Taught Me' in that respect. There's also the fact that I sort of would have liked it if you'd found a way of ending it without bringing yourself into play. 8 for now because I'm a miserable shite and the score's high enough as it is already.
regarding some deleted poem...	daggatolar 62.192.140.92	24-Sep-04/3:13 AM
if one door no close another one no go open. abeg mek you tek courage , and walk on.
Re: Cleansing Sudan by Mr Pig	daggatolar 62.192.140.92	24-Sep-04/3:20 AM
black Africa remains the darkest of heart, no thanks to the joint conspiracy of hard shoe leather of "whiteness" imperialism and the black mongols devouring and sending the youngs to live no other lives than the gun
regarding some deleted poem...	daggatolar 62.192.140.92	24-Sep-04/3:24 AM
how can fall not always come the path of Eve if so easy to words she is moved, to believe oh she believes and to fall she goes
Re: Middle of the Night by Sasha	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	24-Sep-04/4:48 AM
Fiss plaps
Re: Many Thanks by Dovina	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	24-Sep-04/4:49 AM
Appallingly poignant nonsense
Re: Hollywood Is The Pits by Lenore	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	24-Sep-04/4:49 AM
I can't be bothered to read this poem but I'm going to vote anyway
Re: Screws by helenwales	daggatolar 212.199.251.77	24-Sep-04/5:24 AM
if nuts gets opened, the screw-driving is well done. only that, after the "dance" .... whose's flesh wears the "plasters" and who pays the bill for the pains.
Re: Green by berdabear	daggatolar 212.199.251.77	24-Sep-04/5:30 AM
any "green" ripe a pluck,like the above consumated in flesh is worth the "ticklishing" in the mouth.
regarding some deleted poem...	sir_heff 65.172.117.1	24-Sep-04/8:12 AM
very good -9-
Re: Ghost by Caducus	sir_heff 65.172.117.1	24-Sep-04/8:15 AM
i love lines 12 and 13, thats great. gave ya an 8 cause the end is kinda out of place
regarding some deleted poem...	sir_heff 65.172.117.1	24-Sep-04/8:33 AM
catchy
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.21	26-Sep-04/5:44 AM
The only ironically named beige baby I know is Koko P. Maroon. And he's dead from AIDS.
Re: Head On by Bachus	klosterfobik 172.138.126.245	25-Sep-04/3:56 PM
Yawn.
Re: Drunk and Fucked Up by wilco	RION12 64.136.26.226	25-Sep-04/3:59 PM
That was the best poem I read today and forever. You got so much talent.