Re: The Awakening by Leah11	sliver 63.190.80.10	4-Sep-04/11:22 AM
Now is the time, this is the place. Welcome.
Re: One Perfect Moment by Leah11	sliver 63.190.80.10	4-Sep-04/11:23 AM
Only one? I hope there are many more to come.
Re: Game Play by Leah11	sliver 63.190.80.10	4-Sep-04/11:24 AM
Yes, we will. But hell, I like games of chance.
Re: Vic, so Bitter by mogwai	Tintagiles 207.179.148.225	4-Sep-04/11:28 AM
One thing -- there is no need for punctuating the end of every line.
Re: rock me to sleep tonight: by Sapphire	Tintagiles 207.179.148.225	4-Sep-04/11:30 AM
I want to like it. I really do. But there's something about it I can't put my finger on that leaves it just short of what it could be. P.S.: CymbAl. Please.
Re: Down With Ingenuity by Dovina	sliver 63.190.80.10	4-Sep-04/11:31 AM
Can I be on your cabinet? I haven't tried politics yet.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	4-Sep-04/12:13 PM
A tombstone inscription you've prepared in advance? Like WB Yeats, “Cast a cold eye / On life / On death / Horseman, pass by!” The “horseman” probably refers to the aristocracy of his time.
Re: Down Drown by LintyWeenis	Dovina 24.52.157.176	4-Sep-04/12:17 PM
A good thought in need of control. Get a grip on that yarn, tighten it up.
Re: a night of solitude by Faulk	Dovina 24.52.157.176	4-Sep-04/12:23 PM
Quite nice. I'd leave out "heavenly" on line 3, and "lost" in line 5. Line 6: "As the breeze stirs . . . Omit "The totality of" A beautiful scene.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	4-Sep-04/12:26 PM
Calm down please. Let's pour some wine.
Re: Cast of Millions by MacFrantic	Dovina 24.52.157.176	4-Sep-04/12:27 PM
Very amusing.
Re: Lady in Red by Faulk	darylchew 202.156.2.130	5-Sep-04/6:55 AM
some nice comparisons
Re: Hands by cattatplay	darylchew 202.156.2.130	5-Sep-04/6:56 AM
molest?
Re: The Stickmen of Fools by embersandenvelopes	some deleted user 81.178.202.250	4-Sep-04/4:04 PM
VIOLETSUEDE ALERT. VIOLETSUEDE ALERT. VIOLET SUEDE ALERT.
Re: A Soldier by dougsoderstrom	Dovina 24.52.157.176	4-Sep-04/4:54 PM
And where would we be without them? A poignant reminder.
Re: A Soldier by dougsoderstrom	electroman1979 198.81.26.71	4-Sep-04/8:17 PM
good use of words, however, i respect soldiers more than you give them credit for no vote
Re: On Being Born by emilyowey	horus8 24.130.62.63	4-Sep-04/10:29 PM
This is quite possibly the saddest, and most precise poem I've ever read. I am so sorry.
regarding some deleted poem...	Leah11 144.134.213.56	4-Sep-04/10:59 PM
Hi silver this poem shows just a little part of your heart and i love it. Thank you for your comments on my work and living in Australia is great!! People are pretty laid back down under but you get your share of assholes as you would in any other country or planet Id expect. Its great to talk to someone who loves at least 2 of the same things I do and It would be wonderful 2 keep in touch because I reckon we could learn alot from each other being where we are and all blah blah. So what do you reckon MATE? What's it like in Colorado. Ive only ever been to Singapore when I was young so don't have much 1st hand info on the world around me apart from whats on the box. Anyway this comment has turned into a conversation (one way) so il go but as i said would like to stay in touch. Cool Bananas Leah xx
Re: Two Basic Forces by dougsoderstrom	zodiac 217.23.37.85	5-Sep-04/3:25 AM
You fucking retard. I've never read anything this stupid, seriously. Oh, and by the way, your use of ellipses is soooooo cool AND literate! Maybe you do it to seem like a "normal", "chatty", and "generally well-liked guy" instead of "one of the educated elite". Or maybe it's just because you're the dimmest guy ever! Enjoy your life! P.S.-If I were at all inclined to make a conversation out of this, I'd say the primary "forces" "molding" "man's character" are his tendencies to blunder around into things alot and not learn very much from what he's blundered into. This probably leads him to do as many "good" or "selfless" things as "evil" or "selfish" things, since neither is necessarily harder or more distasteful than the other, and since both of those categories are the dampest of turds anyway. So it's not like you're going to get with a lot of nice, non-desperate chicks talking about them! Maybe you should stop! Affectionately, zodiac
Re: A Soldier by dougsoderstrom	zodiac 217.23.37.85	5-Sep-04/3:38 AM
"A mere afterthought for those who would pose war,"