| Re: Tear-Stained Pages by TLRufener |
Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.90.105 |
4-Sep-04/12:03 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.90.105 |
4-Sep-04/12:06 AM |
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BEAUTIFUL!! I THINK THAT THE WORDS THAT U USED WERE VERY DESCRIPTIVE, I REALLY LIKE THIS!!!
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| Re: My Own World War by shit |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 194.222.223.239 |
3-Sep-04/7:52 PM |
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<Begin simile>
<Shoehorne in as many ill-conceived war references as possible>
<Continue for a bit longer>
<Oh wait, got another one>
<There we go>
<Finish>
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| Re: RosalÃa de Castro: When I was born by Sasha |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:06 AM |
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Hey Sasha, long time. I really enjoyed this one, Brings memories to mind that almost make me cry. Just what I needed after last night. Thanks.
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| Re: Tear-Stained Pages by TLRufener |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:08 AM |
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That story should never end, then what would us simple poets write about?
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| Re: The Fence by TLRufener |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:11 AM |
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They never see us 'till it's too late. I miss not being loved, but....hell, I have nothing to give but myself-and I'm not sure that's enough.
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sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:15 AM |
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No, no I don't. But I still desire that all-encompassing love. But if I don't find it I will still love my life. If I can't find someone to give everything I am, I will give to everyone, that is the nature of the beast. Love ya babe.
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sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:17 AM |
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Well done. WELL DONE! need I say more?
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| Re: Devil's Palm by Brandy_n_Cali |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:19 AM |
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I think you should sleep on this and hit it again, it begs for more.
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| Re: NO TIME!! by Brandy_n_Cali |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:22 AM |
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I don't think he's lost, just misplaced. If he holds the key to your freedom, you are going with him.
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| Re: I WILL SURVIVE by massangel62 |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:25 AM |
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Keep fighting. It's all about how you deal with the situations you are presented with in life. And, no matter how bad it is, it's never worth suicide!
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| Re: Stonehenge by longships |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:28 AM |
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Druid? I've always been entranced by the idea of Stonehenge, So, my thoughts exactly.
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| Re: The Day The World Fell Apart by longships |
Faulk 68.20.179.83 |
4-Sep-04/8:50 AM |
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| Re: St. Patrickâs Cathedral by Dovina |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:54 AM |
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Well written, this deserves a place somewhere above all the others, at least for a time. I believe you find peace in a chapel because your soul, which makes you who you are, feels more at home there than in this chaotic world. Just a thought.
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| Re: a night of solitude by Faulk |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/8:57 AM |
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YES!! Very much so. Read my poem The Message(revised).
That is my attempt to discribe camping in these beautiful rocky mountains. Kinda.I got sidetracked.
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| Re: Cast of Millions by MacFrantic |
sliver 63.190.80.173 |
4-Sep-04/9:31 AM |
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| Re: Funny Little World by LintyWeenis |
sliver 63.190.80.10 |
4-Sep-04/11:15 AM |
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| Re: Down Drown by LintyWeenis |
sliver 63.190.80.10 |
4-Sep-04/11:16 AM |
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Waiting for you to vote on something. Anything. Then I'll give you a vote on this.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
4-Sep-04/11:17 AM |
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Out of your league is she? Keep trying will you? So nice of her to leave a small part. A sad comedy how we keep at these passions, not made for solitude. Good.
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| Re: Let your heart roam free by Leah11 |
sliver 63.190.80.10 |
4-Sep-04/11:19 AM |
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Good message, it seems to flow well. How's life in Australia? I've always wanted to go.
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