Re: Down With Ingenuity by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.178	30-Aug-04/10:38 PM
You get my vote.
Re: I Dream..... by frdup717	tisa7 4.14.129.6	30-Aug-04/2:21 PM
who is this about
Re: along the alley by BigB	Dovina 24.52.157.176	30-Aug-04/9:54 AM
The only thing I'd change is punctuation in the first verse to match the others.
Re: Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina	darylchew 202.156.2.130	30-Aug-04/10:13 AM
...what is 'they did it' supposed to mean. vague.
Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac	darylchew 202.156.2.130	30-Aug-04/10:21 AM
i admit it, youre darn good.
Re: The Room by darylchew	Dovina 24.52.157.176	30-Aug-04/9:59 AM
Except for the line, "like my biography," this is much less subtle than "abortion." But I didn't get "abortion" at first. Maybe somewhere between is the balance.
Re: Haunted by Bachus	darylchew 202.156.2.130	30-Aug-04/11:29 AM
have i mentioned, I LOVE THIS POEM.
Re: Haunted by Bachus	darylchew 202.156.2.130	30-Aug-04/10:24 AM
sad. 'I try remembering you, but... Without chipped paint, or weeds.' explain this to me, will you?
Re: Alone by frdup717	tisa7 4.14.129.6	30-Aug-04/2:22 PM
who is this about
Re: He by BigB	Bachus 24.130.62.63	30-Aug-04/11:02 AM
"But you never did came"? Good one, very Arkansass.
Re: Out goes the baby with the garbage by INTRANSIT	Bachus 24.130.62.63	30-Aug-04/11:08 AM
Far out.
Re: The Room by darylchew	Bachus 24.130.62.63	30-Aug-04/11:25 AM
Jesus
Re: abortion by darylchew	nentwined 66.92.28.14	30-Aug-04/12:52 PM
awfully preachy. over-described.
Re: IT All Starts With My Fears by tisa7	tisa7 4.14.129.6	30-Aug-04/1:02 PM
I think this poem makes me sad and want to cry.
regarding some deleted poem...	tisa7 4.14.129.6	30-Aug-04/1:10 PM
this is sad and very good.
Re: The Reason by frdup717	tisa7 4.14.129.6	30-Aug-04/2:17 PM
i now that just checking to make sure
Re: IT All Starts With My Fears by tisa7	electroman1979 198.81.26.71	30-Aug-04/2:52 PM
i liked it, -8-
Re: Stay With Me by FadedHappiness	ForgottenSoul17 216.76.238.226	30-Aug-04/3:45 PM
*9* its okay..
Re: Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	30-Aug-04/3:17 PM
Do you look these word up before you use them. Or are they brain-handy? I see you visited dale. I'm gonna have to dig it out and lay it down for good. if you know what I mean.
Re: Devil's Palm by Brandy_n_Cali	Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.248.127	30-Aug-04/3:30 PM
somone comment please