| Re: Girlz by liljsmith87 |
Torok 212.219.142.161 |
24-Jun-04/4:44 AM |
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aww poor you being stuck on "THE LIST" seems terrible it must have affected you emotionally for you to have written a poem about it, not a terribly genius poem but still a poem none the less, maybe you should get help.
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| Re: This is Bad by newagepoet2000 |
Torok 212.219.142.161 |
24-Jun-04/4:45 AM |
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| Re: Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart |
Torok 212.219.142.161 |
24-Jun-04/4:48 AM |
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wow man you need to stop writing poetry and go speak to someone
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| Re: Breakfast by flouredweevle |
Torok 212.219.142.161 |
24-Jun-04/4:50 AM |
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damn that sounds annoying
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| Re: This Stinks by smarmyfaurt |
Torok 212.219.142.161 |
24-Jun-04/4:51 AM |
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| Re: Thoughts Asunder by wilco |
titan69 62.31.23.43 |
24-Jun-04/12:33 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
embersandenvelopes 68.81.7.16 |
24-Jun-04/2:27 AM |
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you seem infatuated with all things "gay"
You could use a new vocabulary, and seemingly, a new personality as well.
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| Re: love and hate by jessicasgurl |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
24-Jun-04/3:25 AM |
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Do they have schools in your country?
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| Re: A Surrender of the Heart by Torok |
Torok 212.219.142.161 |
24-Jun-04/4:26 AM |
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| Re: TEENAGERS LIFE by jessicasgurl |
arduinn 165.21.83.230 |
24-Jun-04/6:53 AM |
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i agree with the points you laid out but maybe you can improve on your spelling? the structure wasn't there as well... so...
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
moonlightdance 69.134.115.231 |
24-Jun-04/8:29 AM |
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honestly now, have some self-respect
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
moonlightdance 69.134.115.231 |
24-Jun-04/8:33 AM |
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amusing, certainly. there's no need to take yourself seriously all the time. it made me smile, and isn't that enough?
poetry is whatever we want it to be now, isn't it
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| Re: Someday by moonlightdance |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
24-Jun-04/9:04 AM |
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You have no choice. Go for it. Just be careful.
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| Re: The Hot Job by peaceseeker |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
24-Jun-04/9:06 AM |
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| Re: | Broken Memory | by | Broken | |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
24-Jun-04/9:08 AM |
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Destiny and fate change nothing! Get real. Look at life squarely and stop making excuses. Don't stop writing poetry though.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
24-Jun-04/9:50 AM |
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That's "nentwined" or kaolin. And I'd be on lesser sites where people are less honest.
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| Re: Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer |
donmiguel1960 68.96.168.211 |
23-Jun-04/11:49 PM |
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| Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
donmiguel1960 68.96.168.211 |
23-Jun-04/11:50 PM |
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| Re: You and I by Lifeboatman |
versus_u 210.23.113.193 |
24-Jun-04/12:14 AM |
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this piece seemed to me that all the bitterness has escaped you, my friend. be grateful for a love that has blossomed. i'm happy for you..
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| Re: Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer |
SupremeDreamer 204.31.169.107 |
23-Jun-04/11:03 PM |
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Well, I've taken into consideration the only two suggestions for a title, and have decided to use a hybrid of both.. sort of.
Behold its new title: Skuld Resurrected. (Skuld is the Norse goddess of fate, future.. seems that I'm having a sudden flare for mythology these days.)
Any objections or other reactions are welcomed.
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