regarding some deleted poem...	DR Limerick 62.31.23.156	13-Jun-04/1:07 PM
very well done 8/10
regarding some deleted poem...	DR Limerick 62.31.23.156	13-Jun-04/12:54 PM
yes likeed this one 7/10
regarding some deleted poem...	DR Limerick 62.31.23.156	13-Jun-04/1:08 PM
is this kinda dirty?
Re: Lost by arduinn	killingjuliet 142.163.146.169	13-Jun-04/8:41 AM
teenage angst
regarding some deleted poem...	killingjuliet 142.163.146.169	13-Jun-04/8:50 AM
wow. i'm impressed. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.80.180	13-Jun-04/9:18 AM
Damn. That sounds kinda painful.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.80.180	13-Jun-04/9:22 AM
I enjoyed the end very much. The dead returning home.
Re: Big wave by DR Limerick	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	13-Jun-04/2:45 PM
There once was a woman from Taigan Who drew one hell of a floorplan She met a man by shore Though she found him a bore He paid her again and again.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	13-Jun-04/2:47 PM
hey - this is cool.
Re: Hiding by QuirkyWonder	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	13-Jun-04/2:50 PM
ahhhh, dat's chute.
Re: Hiding by QuirkyWonder	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	13-Jun-04/3:45 PM
Tucked away in a bap of shame.
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	13-Jun-04/3:50 PM
a) "Frozen inaction" is stultifyingly redundant. b) "Immobile like the rock of Gibraltar" labours the point into a robo-shameful dullness. c) The plural of "how-to" is not "how-to's". d) You are trying to casually swear, but it's the most contrived swear ever. e) Dashes are weak. -10-
Re: Love by pshah4life	electroman1979 198.81.26.16	12-Jun-04/8:15 PM
should be under the "pimple" catagory, no vote
Re: Of Absinthe and Asphalt by pain killer	zodiac 65.161.41.48	12-Jun-04/8:50 PM
Maybe you'll consider not changing my name so often, as it requires all of thirty seconds of purposeless effort and the soiling of several dozen cheap one-ply johnnies.
Re: The Businessman by abcmonkey78	zodiac 65.161.41.48	12-Jun-04/8:51 PM
If I were a carney, I'd say you were a precious fifteen and a rube to the max.
Re: Love by pshah4life	arduinn 165.21.83.230	12-Jun-04/9:16 PM
Too bland for me. Sorry..
Re: Hiding by QuirkyWonder	electroman1979 198.81.26.16	12-Jun-04/9:50 PM
good poem
regarding some deleted poem...	edpeterson 68.79.21.41	13-Jun-04/7:12 AM
mine's better
Re: Untitled 48 by TLRufener	edpeterson 68.79.21.41	13-Jun-04/7:15 AM
silence calls straight to my soul? and you couldn't even think of a title?
Re: Hiding by QuirkyWonder	edpeterson 68.79.21.41	13-Jun-04/7:21 AM
first half cliche...sort of public domain adage. eventhough ? second half, powerless. average