Re: Bugs by INTRANSIT	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	9-Jun-04/4:11 PM
Many shades of red - so many. Regardless - very well said.
Re: Now That's What I Call Music Vol. 1,087 by Nicholas Jones	wilco 24.176.102.131	9-Jun-04/8:35 PM
I get what you're trying to convey, but its not worded in a manner that gives me wood.
Re: reflexion v.3 - Cannibalization and Twilight by Don-Quixote	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.126	10-Jun-04/3:30 AM
What did the cannibal do after dumping his girlfried? Wiped his bum.
Re: my unicorn by francis nor capule	wilco 24.176.102.131	9-Jun-04/8:37 PM
unicorns? really?
Re: untitled by Desdemona	zodiac 65.161.41.48	9-Jun-04/5:46 PM
Oh dear god...
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 209.178.188.233	9-Jun-04/6:02 PM
Poetaster.
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 209.178.188.233	9-Jun-04/6:07 PM
skimple-skample.
Re: Fool by arduinn	<~> 64.252.171.17	9-Jun-04/7:03 PM
and? come on now. you can do better than that.
Re: Voting on PoemRanker by LuckyJoe	TLRufener 24.158.7.169	9-Jun-04/8:26 PM
I love this poem. It's good for a laugh, and it's relatively truthful. Nice job!
Re: Punk Rock by hobojo	TLRufener 24.158.7.169	9-Jun-04/8:28 PM
A little vague, but agreeable.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	9-Jun-04/8:39 PM
Maybe its because I'm drunk...but I get this and I LIKE it...I'll read it sober and see, but right now...yep.
Re: Bugs by INTRANSIT	wilco 24.176.102.131	9-Jun-04/8:40 PM
true
Re: my unicorn by francis nor capule	Shardik 24.130.62.63	9-Jun-04/4:16 PM
Jesus Creased
Re: Now That's What I Call Music Vol. 1,087 by Nicholas Jones	Shardik 24.130.62.63	9-Jun-04/4:17 PM
Re-heated Macaroni
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165	9-Jun-04/4:34 PM
So- As may be better. For a second I though about pink berets. ????? dummy me. I likes.
Re: driven by ThePariahDog	god'swife 209.178.188.233	9-Jun-04/5:24 PM
That's it, I'm gonna kill somebody. What are you trying, in your own ridiculously long-winded and formless way, to say here? This is clearly about absolutely nothing! What, you went for a drive on a really hot day? Touch and go objectives???? Devil driven influences inable an inner calmness?? How? Surrounding air permissisibly drags you? What, do you live at 40 ATMS? This is hopeless.
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 209.178.188.233	9-Jun-04/5:33 PM
You can taste the glimmered reflection of an ocean moon? If only the thumb wrestling, the glance and the smile convey meaning then why are you writing about all that other crap?
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 65.161.41.48	9-Jun-04/5:33 PM
The first bit is really good and reminds me of Yeats or something. Then it falls apart into crap. Then the crap starts multiplying and increasing its horrible powers. SO - - Don't ever ever write in a poem that "words can't describe" whatever the poem is about. It's a terribly stupid thing to do. - "Discribe" is "describe," anyway. - Why in God's name are you suddenly "itchin"? Why oh why would we want you to abruptly change the poem's voice to that of a backhills rustic? Don't do that! Don't even say "itching to"! It's a silly expression, utterly unpoetic, and if you do say it in real life, I'd highly recommend you stop. Thank you. - That last stanza just fizzles out altogether. It reads like a second-grader's report on "How I spent my summer vacation." You know, the ones you had to write before you learned any tenses but the present indicative. To summarize: Start writing again from the end of the first stanza. Get it together, bud! This ain't the minor leagues any more.
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 209.178.188.233	9-Jun-04/5:38 PM
The marital sin? What the fuck is that? If it's what I think it is, you're horribly repressed. Go directly to looneybins.com and get some therapy. Healed strings? Healed strings? Hahahhahahaha!
Re: Desire by Chasz Misleading	zodiac 65.161.41.48	9-Jun-04/5:45 PM
horus8 might have written this poem about being drilled by Dean Cain while on X at a fabulous Dave Geffen pool party.