Re: Memories of a Suicidal Sophomore by CemeteryBuffsOnline	zodiac 212.118.19.105	29-Mar-05/10:21 PM
What??? What did you do with the knife, then?
Re: a comment on Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom	zodiac 212.118.19.105	29-Mar-05/10:17 PM
Q: Then why didn't you say "a failed murder" instead? Q2: Generally speaking, would you say a suicide can be accidental?
Re: a comment on How to treat young ladies by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	zodiac 212.118.19.105	29-Mar-05/10:14 PM
That's funny, considering the title is taken almost word-for-word from the poem, while your titles are unfailingly wooshes of babble.
Re: a comment on A Second by Luzr	zodiac 212.118.19.105	29-Mar-05/10:06 PM
You are a marvel of incoherence.
Re: a comment on Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.123	29-Mar-05/10:05 PM
More of a failed murder, that results in the death of the would be murder by mistake. Focus more on the images of an evil eye, and a mirror.
Re: Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams	zodiac 212.118.19.105	29-Mar-05/10:02 PM
What do you mean by 'average'? Oh, that they have individual characteristics. Hey, good call. Because surely you can't mean 'as averagely intelligent as you and I'. Since that's what retarded means: lower than average intelligence. PS-"as average as you and I" is really great if you think about it drunk or for longer than ten seconds.
Re: a comment on Plato by not_a_philosopher	edpeterson 68.79.6.28	29-Mar-05/9:48 PM
Is God responsible for things one man thinks good and another evil?
Re: a comment on No Worries by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.19.105	29-Mar-05/9:47 PM
Oh. You retard. Of all the people involved in this poem, would you consider yourself MORE in the lines of a) the wicked (ie, also ironic quoter of Asaph), or b) the pure-hearted? YOU CAN'T ANSWER "NONE". THAT IS AN ABSOLUTELY IMPOSSIBLE ANSWER EXCEPT AS "EXTREME RETARD AEROBATICS". And have you noticed that every time I ask you to take a position on something, you answer that you have no position. Do you consider yourself "wily" and "Socratic"?
Re: a comment on The Symbol by Dovina	edpeterson 68.79.6.28	29-Mar-05/9:46 PM
The cross is awful. The poem is awful.
Re: Reasonably Good by Dovina	edpeterson 68.79.6.28	29-Mar-05/9:40 PM
238 does not rhyme with rat. -0-
Re: a comment on The Symbol by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.19.105	29-Mar-05/9:34 PM
No it's not. Have you asked anyone what the crucifix is a symbol for? Here, I will: ************************* QUESTION FOR THE AUDIENCE ************************* Q: What is the crucifix a symbol for?
Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	edpeterson 68.79.6.28	29-Mar-05/9:25 PM
I suspect the only music you make is in your billowing bloomers.
Re: Memories of a Suicidal Sophomore by CemeteryBuffsOnline	poodietat 68.51.106.137	29-Mar-05/9:06 PM
Wouldn't it suck if Janice committed suicide? lol This is a strong sentiment, if not exactly a poem. Try to avoid cliches, i.e. "Janice is my rock, my hope, my strength, my life." The narrator seems to struggle with individualism, so it hurts when she chooses such common, trite phrasing.
Re: For those of you by sk8rs_rule_all	poodietat 68.51.106.137	29-Mar-05/9:01 PM
This would be twice as good if it were half as long. There's not _that_ much here.
Re: "Lovers or Friends" by jroday	poodietat 68.51.106.137	29-Mar-05/8:57 PM
IMHO, the "friends and lovers" theme has been done to death. This undermines an otherwise decent poem.
Re: Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom	poodietat 68.51.106.137	29-Mar-05/8:52 PM
I don't get it. If it's an accidental suicide, then why is one person on the floor and the other clutching his/her chest? Is it a murder-suicide? A double suicide? Or does the chest-clutching mean something other than death?
Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	poodietat 68.51.106.137	29-Mar-05/8:49 PM
Easily the best poem of yours that I've read. Perhaps I'll visit your archives....
Re: How to treat young ladies by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223	29-Mar-05/12:57 PM
Baron Bumforth's "Brownford Hammer" Makes him a truly first-class rammer. Earl Cliveby, on the other hand, Simply slaps them with his gland.
Re: How to treat young ladies by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Dovina 12.72.13.41	29-Mar-05/10:55 AM
Your title is a misleading welcome mat to young men wishing to learn the gentlemanly arts. Instead of the promised guidance, you relate vile acts of uncouth pseudo-gentlemen, lending no redeeming importance to the telling, such as recommending their castration. May I suggest a rewrite along the lines of flowers, opened doors, candles, and soft, respectful words.
Re: a comment on Reasonably Good by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.13.41	29-Mar-05/10:44 AM
You, young man, are considered a dim from both sides of the aisle.