Re: a comment on Reasonably Good by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.13.41	29-Mar-05/10:39 AM
I can't think of a more stultifyingly colossal cloud to disappear on then with my long-time friend and lover, -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
Re: a comment on Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.14.35	29-Mar-05/7:18 AM
Has my silky talk offended your sensibilities? Then you have missed the obvious underlying meaning in lines like “they’ll call you back to repeat.”
Re: a comment on Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.14.35	29-Mar-05/7:18 AM
Six weeks of piano lessons were enough to send me back to the sand box.
Re: a comment on Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.14.35	29-Mar-05/7:18 AM
Yep, but love takes work and time.
Re: a comment on Reasonably Good by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	29-Mar-05/7:00 AM
If you two aren't careful you will disappear in a colossal cloud of stultified guff.
Re: How to treat young ladies by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	29-Mar-05/6:30 AM
Not forgetting Cholmondeley-Belvoir, Who smites them with his golden retriever; Or that Cad, Hesketh-Horace, who prefers to bite of their clitoris.
Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	29-Mar-05/3:15 AM
Too much flummery.
Re: a comment on "Lovers or Friends" by jroday	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.38	29-Mar-05/2:44 AM
You know damn well daddy did'nt write this shit. He need to put his foot up your ass so far until you feel the moisture off his kneecap.
Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.38	29-Mar-05/2:36 AM
Hello Dovina hope you're doing fine. I love the poem, because I wanted to be a pro. musician before I became a math teacher. trying to play the piano was enough for me.
Re: a comment on Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.38	29-Mar-05/2:18 AM
D. that's my youngest son he's a music major. I like the poem.
Re: 10.25.04 by oneglove	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.77	29-Mar-05/12:38 AM
I'd almost promise, I've heard this story before. Only you did it with much better images.
Re: a comment on A Little Further by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.77	29-Mar-05/12:27 AM
And a good one. I'll keep that in mind when I tackle a rewrite. <3 Jason
Re: A Little Further by thepinkbunnyofdoom	gregsamsa222 24.215.162.98	28-Mar-05/7:58 PM
Nice. Tho i think These words that make the next more broken might work better. Just a thought.
Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	gregsamsa222 24.215.162.98	28-Mar-05/7:51 PM
Not entirely sure of what you mean... I mean, I simply meant that a waitress walked up to the barman and and asked him to get a bottle of zin, a scene i had observed several times while hanging out with a friend of mine who worked at a crappy bar. If anything, I kinda meant the emphasis to be on the waitress noting that there was nothing in the glass, but serving it anyway because it was not her place to question what other people choose to consume. Maybe I should reread with your question in mind...
Re: true love by francis nor capule	tisa7 4.11.251.16	28-Mar-05/6:45 PM
its so romanic i've never read such great work
Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	28-Mar-05/5:00 PM
Gotta love music.
Re: id by FreeFormFixation	Dovina 12.72.8.157	28-Mar-05/4:59 PM
You've got a good idea for a poem here, but it appears following too closely to the truth of the event. To tell the truth, you have to lie sometimes. To relate a thing, you have to change it.
Re: a comment on Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.8.157	28-Mar-05/4:50 PM
Glad you like the dayum thang I did. If only I knew what I've done.
Re: a comment on Plato by not_a_philosopher	Dovina 12.72.8.157	28-Mar-05/4:36 PM
"God is not responsible for all things, but for good things only. Causes for evil must be sought elsewhere. To present God as the author of evil is suicidal, ruinous, impious." - The Republic
Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	blacksoul 204.215.33.244	28-Mar-05/4:05 PM
D. luv the flo, keep doin' the dayum thang sugga.