| Re: Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
8-Mar-05/7:30 PM |
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Easy day. These things usually drag on for months. Who the hell is Devilbuni?
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| Re: genious by the_poetess |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
8-Mar-05/7:23 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138 |
8-Mar-05/7:19 PM |
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Well, while poets are farmer-like in some respects, I was thinking about road tractors. The Idea was spawned from a dump trucks brakes, but that seems too wordy and interrupts what little rhythm I have here.
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| Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
8-Mar-05/5:32 PM |
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I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
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| Re: Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro |
Dovina 12.72.5.14 |
8-Mar-05/4:14 PM |
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I'm sure thepinkbunnyofdoom appreciates the 10 you gave to each of his poems today, and the zeros needed to raise several of his to the top 20, helped of course by the 10's of Vince Dolamando, Nicely done! You realize, the poetntial is unlimited with multiple usernames and annonymous votes.
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| Re: Scars by DevilTmptrss |
burgerking33 69.242.53.159 |
8-Mar-05/3:38 PM |
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kinda depressing, don't you think.
if it's based on a true and personal experience,
i feel for ya. It was a decent piece of writing, but it
needs revision to make it to the top.
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| Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus |
burgerking33 69.242.53.159 |
8-Mar-05/3:35 PM |
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in-cred-a-bull.
man, this was AM-AZ-ING. this is what poetry
is all about,
well done. i wish i could give you an 11.
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| Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus |
burgerking33 69.242.53.159 |
8-Mar-05/3:32 PM |
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i reread your poem and i take back what i said. i was a little too harsh on you, and i'm sorry. It wasn't bad, but i think it needs revision. i'll give you a 6. a very good improvement since your earlier writings, may i add. -thanks
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| Re: James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
burgerking33 69.242.53.159 |
8-Mar-05/3:21 PM |
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brought a tear to my eye and was very inspirational. well done, you're amazing. well written. a beautiful poem. I'll give you a 6, because i still think you need a little bit of work. you're on the right track!
good.
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| Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33 |
burgerking33 69.242.53.159 |
8-Mar-05/3:14 PM |
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great job a beautiful poem and well written. well done.
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| Re: a comment on Beetwen by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.5.14 |
8-Mar-05/3:02 PM |
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Actually, sex and chaotic spelling go nicely together â not difficult atol.
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| Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 12.72.5.14 |
8-Mar-05/2:57 PM |
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Portently is from portent. Their tetherball and foursdquare games portend the kind of grownups they will become.
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| Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 12.72.5.14 |
8-Mar-05/2:54 PM |
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If you're calling it Poet, Earth Mover, then maybe use bulldozer in the last line. Or you could call it Poet, Farmer.
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| Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.9.93 |
8-Mar-05/2:37 PM |
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Whats sad is its true, but funny none the less, welcome back.
<3 Jason
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| Re: Beetwen by Dovina |
INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67 |
8-Mar-05/2:04 PM |
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10 for the difficulty in intentionally fucking the spelling up.
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| Re: Pilgrim by richa |
INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67 |
8-Mar-05/1:48 PM |
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richa. you posted. how wierd. the crust reference makes me grin.
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| Re: Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
DurtKL 65.60.139.26 |
8-Mar-05/1:24 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL |
DurtKL 65.60.139.26 |
8-Mar-05/1:23 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Losing To Anatomy by Blindpoetry |
crooked_smile 205.188.116.195 |
8-Mar-05/12:03 PM |
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| Re: Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
crooked_smile 205.188.116.135 |
8-Mar-05/11:52 AM |
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this appears to be a bunch of rambling nonsense - 3 -
-lia
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