Re: Memories by RION12	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	8-Mar-05/9:25 PM
What memories? Peeing in the kiddie pool while everyone was watching? Or was it the episode of 7th heaven that changed your life? Grow up and learn to use grammar correctly. *4*
Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	8-Mar-05/9:20 PM
RION12 Q.If these "bitches" don't know anything about you, nor do you care about them, nor do they have the irrelevant ability to do things that you can do, nor can they say shit to you, and you care more about their ability to perform oral sex on a man than the poem itself, then why comment? A. you're a douchebag, and this poem is very original and very good. *10*
Re: Memories by RION12	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/9:17 PM
take your memories, learn something from every even good or bad in your life... then it makes everything youve endured worth while, make a negitive memory or even a positive turning point and valuble lesson in life.. and you cant help but be grateful for memories. workes for me ;) ~Autumn
Re: Do You Need Me? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/9:15 PM
Im not sure, i think i have an issue with the thought that you think someone would be "invisable without you.... like thats crap for sure, and be honest with yourself here we ALL have problems, and if you feel so used and mis-needed then why?? why?
Re: wishes by the_poetess	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/9:10 PM
its truly sad how most live in the box our society has created, personaly im waiting for the news flash that all will change we will be shed of the elite control that seeks to conform us at every corner.. so sad, but hope holds strong for many, we will be free and our lives will once again be ours to live, freely without restraint, or repression, find a feild and run, do what ever empowers you, what ever rekindles that spark. and above all...Step away from the chocolates no hope of flyin with searching for happiness in a truffle box! ~Autumn
Re: Snow Sucks by JoyLuck	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/9:08 PM
I love how all is by itself. -7-
Re: a comment on Snow Sucks by JoyLuck	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/9:07 PM
I have to disagree with you there. You forgot that poetry is an art form, and as such should have so artistic value to it. Poets are painter who use words as their canvas. This is a however painting with words. Thats why its a poem. <3 Jason
Re: Attention: Superman's Coffee Break is From 1:35 to 1:37 by MacFrantic	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/9:03 PM
lol, great writing. -10-
Re: a comment on Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/9:00 PM
Not really actually. I prefer to be ranked where I should be ranked. Not that seeing my name in the top 20 isn't nice and all, I'd like to think that I made it there on my own merits. <3 Jason
Re: Striking minds by celticskatermatt1	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/8:58 PM
? i feel like i missing something here....... or is it just me /:?
Re: a comment on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/8:54 PM
You rate me a 6? On the right track? Look at the list of things I have written compared to you. In fact look at my first poem, a lyric called Idiot Box. Until your poems are at least of that caliber(Which isn't that high really) I'd prefer you never rate my words again. <3 Jason
Re: Get Away by Miggy	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/8:51 PM
not bad, speeks loudly of how so many would rather complain about thier lives then really take the steps to figure it out and solve their problems, yet it always seems to help by being there to listen and offer support and simple obvious unjudgemental advice rather then ignore those in need.... ~Autumn
Re: Disfigure by DevilBuni	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/8:47 PM
Good sentiment, but it needs fleshed out. Nice name by the way. -7- <3 Jason
Re: A Nation by the_poetess	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/8:46 PM
i love a good eye opening poem. good job, im not american, blessed be. but as a human i agree.
Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/8:43 PM
And you bother to write poetry because? Your sister dared you? You thought that somehow you'd develop a skill for it that no knew you possed? Or you were way too bored? Whatever the reason, stop. Your not good at it, and if think this is good than I pity you, and say, read some lyrics from the music you listen to. Because if you at least read the words of people using things like similes, and metaphors, you might actually have come here with something better that looks like a poem. -0- I see no artistic value in this what so ever. Much less your praising yourself before anyone else read your words(All though whether you knew it or not at the time it was smart, because I doubt mainy other people will).
Re: a comment on Half Empty, Half Whole by Rainbow_chaser	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/8:36 PM
ah youthful even at 23 when writting this poem i dont recall feeling youthful but it is a wonderful thought. I just felt i had to respond to the comment you left here, to me it sounded like you were implying weighing of the soul set you up as being a failure... was this correct? I disagree with the woe is me comment as well. Perhapes if i had left this poem in hopes of some attention to how i was feeling at this low point in my life then i could see your point, but being a person who just writes to move emotion i disagree. Could you tell me honestly that you have never experianced situations that have weighed your soul so to speek?. ... perhaps not and your diffrent from the rest of us, hats off to you then. lol what im getting at here is that growth can come from moving emotion on a seemingly hopeless situation a persone may be faced with, obviously at this time i felt very lonely, and that i felt asthough i was on a search for a needle in a haystack, yes i felt hopeless, i felt like turning my back and giving up... but simply writting this very simple rather boring poem, i gave myself a key to unlock the emotion.... therefore moving the deperate feeling of lonelyness and the urge to give up, . let me ask you this have you ever felt like you were up against the whole world....and all you had the energy left to do, was crawl into bed and nap? i can tell you this, when i write i write with ever fiber of my core, and move pure emotion, openly and honestly, i leave it for a day or two, come back and read over what i wrote. do you know what i get from this? a peek into myself, without denials or doubt or shame, no front no bullshit just pure emotion, by rereading what i have written i can then see it from a diffrent stand point, and see what it is i need to do to move forward. Hell im my own damn shrink :D and the price is much more affordable. lol ~Autumn P.S~ just one more thing, maybe not all of us post our writting in hopes of making it big as writters, alot of us post our writtings in hopes of making it by, in life. Or i know i do.
Re: a comment on Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/8:31 PM
No Idea. They're profile from (I think its)frostclouds.com says they live in Connecticut.
Re: a comment on Calling My Essence From The Gap by Rainbow_chaser	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/7:59 PM
Hello there, i just want to thank you, when you left a message i was able to find my way back to this site, it has been along while since my last visit. Im glad you enjoyed this poem, it means alot to me, and its nice to hear another felt some of what i felt when i wrote it. thank you once again~ ~Autumn
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/7:56 PM
Well Mother earth being the female polar aspect, that would leave father creator as the male polar aspect..would it not? hence the phraze "mother earth father sky". if you really look around you will find a polar balance in everything, it is the key to healing all. hope this helped ;)
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/7:53 PM
yes i am aware my writting comes across weak at times, but i do write to move inner emotional blocks. I dont dream of ever going anywhere with my writtings, as you can obviously see i have little schooling. Writting to me is mearly a movment, a vent, a release of emotion, thought or experiances perhaps to painful to move safely in any other way.... behind our fronts we place as a safe guard........we are all human beings, striving to hide the obvious. Pretending to stride through life unscathed, when the majority bearly hold togeather enough to bringforth and follow through with why it is they are here to begin with. "Practice"..well they say it makes perfect, at 26 i see myself with the rest of my life to grow learn and evolve towards "Better". Reading well one could never read or learn enough. As for the weak writtings..... i must say this, true strength is found in utter weakness, if one would only look around and grow from each experiance.... well then all could benifit from alittle weakness. i must also add this, in every writting that comes from the heart or soul of every person. You will find a check point for every step along a path in their lives, and looking back years later over recorded thought, emotion and experiance. It is a very sobering realization of the growth that one can make in a small amount of time. So look at it as a growth chart, a positive force to continue moving forward on your path. I write not for the praise of another i write and share some of what i feel and endure in hopes of perhaps letting another (who might be at that very same check point on their own path) Know they are not alone, that we all feel.... 90% just try to walk around pretending they are "strong" or never feel alone or unsure of themselves...or perhaps they are just compleatly out of touch with who they really are..........?