Re: Poetry translation(M. Tsvetayeva) by Olya	Dovina 205.184.70.141	22-Jan-05/1:44 PM
Some very strange language this. Too many lines don't make sense.
Re: fly me away by damianlow	Dovina 205.184.70.141	22-Jan-05/1:41 PM
Better than most of the pop lyrics I hear. I'd like it get into the kinda mood of "Bridge Over Troubled Waters" a little more though.
Re: Homophobic Self-Help Poem. (For the men who drive a mustang) by SupremeDreamer	Dovina 205.184.70.141	22-Jan-05/1:36 PM
Well, as long as you write about and don't do it that's good. It happens I am a woman and my tits do sag, but ya know what, I wear a bra and stand erect and go about as if I had something worthwhile to do besides write and write about sadness.
Re: #28 by Lifeboatman	Dovina 205.184.70.141	22-Jan-05/1:30 PM
Is Shakespeare your tutor? I don't like most of his sonets and I don't like this, even if it is hard to write.
Re: Life is my agony by Prince of Void	Dovina 205.184.70.141	22-Jan-05/1:27 PM
Oh, for God's sake get over it! Have another drink. Write another poem. Go for a walk. Do something! This sitting around feeling sorry for yourself, well it's selfish and wrong. If I were on the stool next to you I'd buy you a drink.
Re: a comment on Hate the Contestant by Blindpoetry	Goad 217.226.29.153	22-Jan-05/8:21 AM
yep, still in die Deutschland, writing shitty web applications for big corporations. I'm even starting to speak a little german these days. 'n you? still teaching poetry?
Re: a comment on Hate the Contestant by Blindpoetry	Goad 217.226.29.153	22-Jan-05/8:18 AM
You're about as noncomformist as my ass when I sit on a (very hard) chair. Sometimes it makes rumbling grumbling noises but we all know it's conforming, as always, to the shape of the chair. That's its purpose. It's an ass.
Re: Rustic Rainstorm by MacFrantic	Dovina 209.247.222.108	22-Jan-05/7:05 AM
I like the cow pies turning ripe in the rain and their smell in the wind, a fresh, good smell. I've had my own private thunderstorm and liked it very much.
Re: a comment on The Stone Seeker and the Stacking by darkshark	zodiac 212.118.11.30	22-Jan-05/5:28 AM
He's just trying out his new role as "poemranker hardass". He gave himself away saying any literary magazine would look twice at this.
Re: a comment on Tale of a lonely heart by Bhaskaryya	zodiac 212.118.11.30	22-Jan-05/5:26 AM
Welcome back "schmalzy weltschmerz" is good. Are you still in Deutschland?
Re: a comment on the pretenders by PopoyMola	zodiac 212.118.11.30	22-Jan-05/5:19 AM
You fakey archaic writing is the single most godawful thing about poemranker. Great work!!!!!
Re: a comment on In the Shadows by Beyond_Dreams	zodiac 212.118.11.30	22-Jan-05/5:16 AM
Hey! Good save!!!!!!!! -0-
Re: a comment on Thong Thoo by fatmansinging	zodiac 212.118.11.30	22-Jan-05/5:09 AM
I love how the first thing you did on joining the site was go to the worst poems list and comment on how bad all the poems are. No one can object to you that way, right? Wrong. fatmansinging chose that title simply because it encapsulates the feeling of the rest of his poem, like everybody else does.
Re: Conjugate the verb by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	22-Jan-05/5:04 AM
quendavisti. vide! quendo quendamus quendas quendatis quendat quendant quendavi quendavimus quendavisti quendavistis quendavit quendaverunt quendaveram quendaveramus quendaveras quendaveratis quendaverat quendaverant quendavero quendaverimus quendaveris quendaveritis quendaverit quendaverint
Re: a comment on Hate the Contestant by Blindpoetry	zodiac 212.118.11.30	22-Jan-05/4:59 AM
Shut up, please. And bother to spell "starring" correctly.
Re: a comment on Playfight by fevriere	fevriere 62.254.128.4	22-Jan-05/3:11 AM
Yes; Othello.
Re: Conjugate the verb by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.68.223.22	21-Jan-05/11:23 PM
Hows can you even consider this to be free verse. More like "other", or perhaps, Caged Verse. Either way, I thought it was crap. But eh? What do I know.
Re: The Stone Seeker and the Stacking by darkshark	Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2	21-Jan-05/10:30 PM
very good, very good.. Don't know what you did to the dreamer there, but I found the poem delightful, so whould he if he wasn't in a bad mood.. 10 of course
Re: The Stone Seeker and the Stacking by darkshark	Shuushin 64.222.171.12	21-Jan-05/9:17 PM
Certainly not a zero - and I don't know what you did to piss off supremedreamer. This has moments of very nice poetry, but then it starts and fits into almost a Caricature of poetry. Notch it back a bit and give the thing some focus.
Re: Homophobic Self-Help Poem. (For the men who drive a mustang) by SupremeDreamer	Shuushin 64.222.171.12	21-Jan-05/9:12 PM
Beautiful first stanza, my friend. S5, also very good. I can't quite talk myself into the tone of it somehow though.