CommentsComments 23281–23300 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

Lifeboatman on Ruins by Caducus 21 Dec 2004, 4:44 AM
Intelligent.. 7
Lifeboatman on Horror at the grotto by scitz 21 Dec 2004, 4:41 AM
ouch.. 10
Lifeboatman on Mallard by richa 21 Dec 2004, 4:39 AM
good.. 10.. I'm having duck tonight
Lifeboatman on At Second Glance by Jeremi B. Handrinos 21 Dec 2004, 4:38 AM
How come it's good when you are scared and not being selfish?? 10
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 3:55 AM
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 3:38 AM
The difference between you as a mathematician, and Van Guff as a painter, is that Van Guff was an excellent painter, who painted all the time, whereas you are an appalling mathematician, who has done very little mathematics.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 3:31 AM
"don't confuse numbers with maths" And yet an Gentleman may write an poeme about an carrot. And is he not entitled to call it "Vegetable Poeme"? No, no, I suppose he isn't.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 3:25 AM
"Some clearly can" Do you know any good maths poemes? The only one I can think of is this little gem by Lewis Carroll (who was a Mathematics Lecturer at Christ Church, Oxford): And what mean all these mysteries to me Whose life is full of indicies and surds? x^2 + 7x + 53 = 11/3
ho_hum replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 2:56 AM
Being a non-mathematician you won't get this; but don't confuse numbers with maths. A strong element of good poetry is the elegant and effective use of language. Maths is just another language, and many mathematicians (those who understand and appreciate the language) find a great deal of it very poetic. A site called 'theoremranker.com' could bear remarkable resemblances to this, but in the same way that few non-english speakers will visit this site, few non-mathematicians would find worthwhile content in theoremranker.
auscot replying on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams 21 Dec 2004, 2:37 AM
Yes.
richa replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 2:22 AM
I am not surprised you are being vague and elliptic, your core idea seems to be you don't know how to make maths poetic. Some clearly can so the poem is redundant. Of course you could always depict a sculptor as an writer. That would be an ace idea.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 2:11 AM
Would that it were.
Beyond_Dreams replying on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams 20 Dec 2004, 10:52 PM
Thank you :)
PsydewaysTears on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams 20 Dec 2004, 10:29 PM
Overall an intereting take on what so many have such a powerful position of opinion in. I liked the second and third stanzas best, but don't think I'd try and change anything about the others. The imagery is too strong to risk altering in even the slightest way. •°•Gregory James•°•
Beyond_Dreams on Interstellar Hell by PsydewaysTears 20 Dec 2004, 9:48 PM
I thought this poem portrayed the meaning very well....It's pretty obvious you're talking about your feelings, 'But I've learned to black out the sky'--Meaning you are holding back and forgetting, almost like one pushes into the darkness of their mind "pain". This is how I found the poem to be...Maybe a little easily read for me. I mean it has a nice forefront but the inner being of it has been said a million times by other poets. The idea wasn't very original. Over all though I liked it
Beyond_Dreams on Math Poem by Dovina 20 Dec 2004, 7:50 PM
Creative and unique. I'm tempted to say this poem wasn't my style, but I’m reserved at saying that too. I've never came across a mathematical poem before. It is as I had mentioned before very unique......
Dovina replying on Decline and Fall by auscot 20 Dec 2004, 7:05 PM
There's a little red x that you must never touch unless you're really grossed out by a comment. Once you touch the devil x, there is no retreat.
auscot on Decline and Fall by auscot 20 Dec 2004, 6:50 PM
Dovina, I was unaware I had deleted comments on Decline and Fall, must have been the devil in me. Re The Drop I prefer my ending its the only time I get a commended.
auscot on This God of mine by Bobjim 20 Dec 2004, 6:34 PM
I'm not into borrowing Gods. I worship the great outdoors and this wonderful world, which evolved over time for us to live in and enjoy.
auscot on If I knew by Rabbit 20 Dec 2004, 6:28 PM
This is a reminder to all of us that love is a four letter word which must be used frequently, without qualification. It is the poem we all love to hear. This poem reached me and I'm old and cynical. Well done.