Lifeboatman
on Ruins by Caducus
21 Dec 2004, 4:44 AM
Intelligent.. 7
ouch.. 10
good.. 10.. I'm having duck tonight
How come it's good when you are scared and not being selfish?? 10
The difference between you as a mathematician, and Van Guff as a painter, is that Van Guff was an excellent painter, who painted all the time, whereas you are an appalling mathematician, who has done very little mathematics.
"don't confuse numbers with maths"
And yet an Gentleman may write an poeme about an carrot. And is he not entitled to call it "Vegetable Poeme"? No, no, I suppose he isn't.
"Some clearly can"
Do you know any good maths poemes? The only one I can think of is this little gem by Lewis Carroll (who was a Mathematics Lecturer at Christ Church, Oxford):
And what mean all these mysteries to me
Whose life is full of indicies and surds?
x^2 + 7x + 53
= 11/3
Being a non-mathematician you won't get this; but don't confuse numbers with maths. A strong element of good poetry is the elegant and effective use of language. Maths is just another language, and many mathematicians (those who understand and appreciate the language) find a great deal of it very poetic. A site called 'theoremranker.com' could bear remarkable resemblances to this, but in the same way that few non-english speakers will visit this site, few non-mathematicians would find worthwhile content in theoremranker.
Yes.
I am not surprised you are being vague and elliptic, your core idea seems to be you don't know how to make maths poetic. Some clearly can so the poem is redundant. Of course you could always depict a sculptor as an writer. That would be an ace idea.
Would that it were.
Thank you :)
Overall an intereting take on what so many have such a powerful position of opinion in. I liked the second and third stanzas best, but don't think I'd try and change anything about the others. The imagery is too strong to risk altering in even the slightest way.
•°•Gregory James•°•
I thought this poem portrayed the meaning very well....It's pretty obvious you're talking about your feelings, 'But I've learned to black out the sky'--Meaning you are holding back and forgetting, almost like one pushes into the darkness of their mind "pain".
This is how I found the poem to be...Maybe a little easily read for me. I mean it has a nice forefront but the inner being of it has been said a million times by other poets. The idea wasn't very original.
Over all though I liked it
Creative and unique. I'm tempted to say this poem wasn't my style, but I’m reserved at saying that too. I've never came across a mathematical poem before. It is as I had mentioned before very unique......
There's a little red x that you must never touch unless you're really grossed out by a comment. Once you touch the devil x, there is no retreat.
Dovina, I was unaware I had deleted comments on Decline and Fall, must have been the devil in me. Re The Drop I prefer my ending its the only time I get a commended.
I'm not into borrowing Gods. I worship the great outdoors and this wonderful world, which evolved over time for us to live in and enjoy.