hendrimike
on two by hendrimike
12 Dec 2004, 4:57 PM
nobody ever votes
the catalogue serves the perspective to perfection
odd
At least they're talking to you. Either I've gone so horribly off track that no lifeline can reach, or I'm so accurate now no one can complain. I'm leaning on the former. Can I borrow some dope?
I'm afraid there is only one way for foreignors to penetrate The Rutherford Club. You must complete the official application form: http://tinyurl.com/5pkxc
Your application will then be considered by the High Council of Vice-Rutherfords, whereupon you may be summoned to take part in a gruelling series of Reverse Buttock Thrusts, followed by the infinitely humiliating HOBO SQUAT. Only then will you be ready for the Inaugural Debagging Session in the Officer's Mess.
I doubt you've got what it takes, quite frankly.
Oh, I'm getting it! You're moving your definitions of nebulous terms around to suit your most recent arguement, rather than, as I am, sticking to the dictionary definitions. Slang, by the way, is alright if we both know what it means; otherwise it's no better than jargon.
A improvement over "Going Camping," quite good, but I wish you'd remove that dripping shower.
(submitted for application to The Rutherford Club)
Preaching to the choir-Amen.
Ditto
The title and concept are great, actually. The poem is just a very raw explaination. Give us some imagery and try to work in some poetic devices. I think you have over-explained it in this version so please don't waste your time on trying to clarify the idea in later versions. Just make us feel the way you feel.
The title and concept are great, actually. The poem is just a very raw explaination. Give us some imagery and try to work in some poetic devices. I think you have over-explained it in this version so please don't waste your time on trying to clarify the idea in later versions. Just make us feel the way you feel.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Where's Jeremi B. Handrinos? by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
12 Dec 2004, 4:20 AM
Feel free to submit an application form. But it's highly unlikely The Rutherford Club would ever employ a homosexual.
I like this man! -10-
My middle brother lives in Los Angles, and I went to visit him. so I can relate to what you are saying -10-
Hilarious and serious???
Wow! I can't understand the low scores on this one. Even when your writing is a little unhinged I find you establish a feeling. Maybe it's just because I'm a nature nut.
This is a good sketch for the poem that evolved from it.