fevriere
replying on WHAT YOU GIVE AWAY IS WHAT YOU TAKE TO HEAVEN by w~* ATHENA *~w
16 Nov 2004, 2:19 PM
I thought you said you wanted to poke holes in her? Isn't that an expression of endearment?
FUcking hilarious
Or could i have been struck by lightning several times?
No i dont belive it,
Or could i have a pyromaniac problem?
Yes, but that isnt the reason.
Could it be because one of your school friends changed the "I love you baby" song to fit your name, and one of the rhyming words on the next line was sparky, and from then on he kept calling you that and others started to call you it aswell?
Well to be Frank, Yes, but im not frank, im sparky.
I will be giving
You 10 points for amazing
commenting
rhyming
skillsing
your point?
Lovely
When in deadly danger,
When beset by doubt,
Run in little circles,
Wave your arms and shout.
i call this masterpieve 'Panic', and it was written by me. :D
Rubbish, Bobjim is an infamous philosopher, we all know that well known philosophers are also mathematicians, well where do you think phythagoras's theorem comes from, where do you think de Moivre got his theorem from. All this comes down to Bobjim and the common truth that is you are a philosopher then you are also a mathematician, and if you are a good mathematician then you area also a good philosopher. If you want any more proof, read a book i havent written, it explains it all. Everything you know of comes down to the fact that Bobjim did it first and others copied and took the credit of it.
RGSsparky
replying on WHAT YOU GIVE AWAY IS WHAT YOU TAKE TO HEAVEN by w~* ATHENA *~w
16 Nov 2004, 12:59 PM
Not if i get there slightly before you :D hehehe
Then you're probably even worse at philosophy than you seem.
The T-word irritates me, I find the idea of poets (or anyone) saying what truth is a bit pretentious. The F-word in the penultimate line, the same. As for 'converse' maybe use reciprocal or something like that.
I like the line breaks, they build tension, make the words seem like worth living too.
Just thinking though, is "nighttime sun" just there to rhyme with "captive one"?, because I don't know if it belongs, otherwise.
Psh
I disagree.
BIG FAT WOW.