CommentsComments 23861–23880 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

I thought you said you wanted to poke holes in her? Isn't that an expression of endearment?
fevriere on madness by mashasha 16 Nov 2004, 2:17 PM
"u" is not a word.
fevriere on Feminist? by RGSsparky 16 Nov 2004, 2:16 PM
Undelightful and horrible grammar.
edpeterson on Feminist? by RGSsparky 16 Nov 2004, 2:02 PM
FUcking hilarious
RGSsparky on madness by mashasha 16 Nov 2004, 1:48 PM
very odd, very difernt, very weird, but still, i always give a 10
RGSsparky replying on The Sparky by RGSsparky 16 Nov 2004, 1:28 PM
Or could i have been struck by lightning several times? No i dont belive it, Or could i have a pyromaniac problem? Yes, but that isnt the reason. Could it be because one of your school friends changed the "I love you baby" song to fit your name, and one of the rhyming words on the next line was sparky, and from then on he kept calling you that and others started to call you it aswell? Well to be Frank, Yes, but im not frank, im sparky.
RGSsparky replying on The Sparky by RGSsparky 16 Nov 2004, 1:24 PM
I will be giving You 10 points for amazing commenting rhyming skillsing
your point?
RGSsparky on Last dance at the lake by Caducus 16 Nov 2004, 1:17 PM
Lovely
RGSsparky replying on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 1:14 PM
When in deadly danger, When beset by doubt, Run in little circles, Wave your arms and shout. i call this masterpieve 'Panic', and it was written by me. :D
RGSsparky replying on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 1:12 PM
Rubbish, Bobjim is an infamous philosopher, we all know that well known philosophers are also mathematicians, well where do you think phythagoras's theorem comes from, where do you think de Moivre got his theorem from. All this comes down to Bobjim and the common truth that is you are a philosopher then you are also a mathematician, and if you are a good mathematician then you area also a good philosopher. If you want any more proof, read a book i havent written, it explains it all. Everything you know of comes down to the fact that Bobjim did it first and others copied and took the credit of it.
Not if i get there slightly before you :D hehehe
RGSsparky on Feminist? by RGSsparky 16 Nov 2004, 12:57 PM
I met the most annoying American feminist, hence the above...
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 12:24 PM
Then you're probably even worse at philosophy than you seem.
richa on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 11:50 AM
The T-word irritates me, I find the idea of poets (or anyone) saying what truth is a bit pretentious. The F-word in the penultimate line, the same. As for 'converse' maybe use reciprocal or something like that.
fevriere on Trapped in a horseshoe by INTRANSIT 16 Nov 2004, 9:51 AM
I like the line breaks, they build tension, make the words seem like worth living too. Just thinking though, is "nighttime sun" just there to rhyme with "captive one"?, because I don't know if it belongs, otherwise.
[mojo] on For Ike by INTRANSIT 16 Nov 2004, 9:46 AM
Excellent. I was needing a little bit of rhyme and along it came... bang on time. V nice.
Bobjim on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 9:11 AM
Psh
Bobjim replying on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 9:11 AM
I disagree.
Stephen Robins on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 8:57 AM
BIG FAT WOW.