CommentsComments 24241–24260 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone 5 Nov 2004, 12:46 PM
I tried to beard Christ with a money shot, slath'ring him thick with my "honey". But to my surprise, It went in his eyes, Which he didn't think was 'tall funny.
Dovina on Dear Bartleby by Blurred Crusade 5 Nov 2004, 10:53 AM
A fine archaic letter, as if written a hundred years ago. Not a poem, really, but it shows us just enough to get the point. I'd vote 10 if this were a letters site.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Grandma by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 10:21 AM
senile
jroday replying on Grandma by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 9:58 AM
thats true, I did'nt think about that at the time, you are so very right.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Grandma by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 9:42 AM
> small god, but you know the real God would'nt let that happen. I find that rather extraordinary. God regularly lets people accidentally burn themselves to death. And I'm not just talking about the heathens, either.
edpeterson on ishte ishta by IcHronit 5 Nov 2004, 9:14 AM
you should try to work some AIDS into the poem. That would really give that extry cutting edge.
jroday replying on Grandma by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 9:13 AM
small god, but you know the real God would'nt let that happen. anyway we are taught that fire burns. maybe one day the real God will show some of us how it feels when we are burning in HELL
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Grandma by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 8:58 AM
yeah that's the number one cause of death among elderlies :(
richa replying on Grandma by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 8:50 AM
a person is old when they put their hand in a fire and god does not care enough to make them pull it away :(
Tara57 replying on Poemranker I Couldn't stay Away by Tara57 5 Nov 2004, 7:26 AM
I do I do
zodiac replying on Ending by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 5:13 AM
The statement "I like X" is not unsupportable.
edpeterson on Poemranker I Couldn't stay Away by Tara57 5 Nov 2004, 5:09 AM
i can hear the crickets chirping. listen. can you hear it too?
jroday replying on Grandma by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 3:44 AM
I'm not an old man yet, but growing older pains really hurts. thats why young people need to try to take good care of themselfs while they are young.because if they dont,it will come back to haunt them one day.
jroday replying on Grandma by Dovina 5 Nov 2004, 2:32 AM
D.A. you know one day, If we live that long we are going to get old. Don't put no bad mouth on me I'm almost a half century old.
oneglove replying on 10.25.04 by oneglove 4 Nov 2004, 8:58 PM
also a line break does seem like a good idea and theyre ill fated because other than the occasional day together theyre always just chaser and chased, for eternity
oneglove replying on 10.25.04 by oneglove 4 Nov 2004, 8:56 PM
i was driving back to school after seeing my girlfriend on that day
Dan garcia-Black on Grandma by Dovina 4 Nov 2004, 8:09 PM
Yeah, as one's senses dull with age, it seems that the only thing one still feels strongly as it did in youth is pain. Pain changes from "growing pains" to "growing older pains."
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on 10.25.04 by oneglove 4 Nov 2004, 5:14 PM
On 10.25.04, while you were gallavanting about in pursuit of the ultimate lewd, I was at home soaking my mulberries in the oils of clove. If only you could boast of time similarly well spent, my lad.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Neil Simon is Living in My Lunula by MacFrantic 4 Nov 2004, 5:10 PM
I think this should be classified as 'Other'.
wilco replying on Perfect Time of Year by wilco 4 Nov 2004, 4:35 PM
The different line is actually partially about fall and partially about a certain event that happened on Tuesday...;)