CommentsComments 25061–25080 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

nocturnalism on Bound by lambdaphi874 30 Sep 2004, 10:11 PM
why torture you must endure
horus8 on Anemone Drowning by D. $ Fontera 30 Sep 2004, 3:50 PM
lol
horus8 on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha 30 Sep 2004, 3:48 PM
Trill, like nuding with lark.
horus8 on Coldfront by klosterfobik 30 Sep 2004, 3:46 PM
I bet you thought I wasn't going to push flush huh? because of your besplatterment of mine fine scrolls? Think again.
horus8 on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik 30 Sep 2004, 3:44 PM
A laquered quail in pose.
horus8 on Put it away! by Special Needs 30 Sep 2004, 3:42 PM
Rubbish
INTRANSIT replying on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha 30 Sep 2004, 2:28 PM
Hit 'im again!!
Sasha replying on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha 30 Sep 2004, 1:50 PM
having taken a look at your œvre, which at the moment consists of two posts, both of which have a rating below 5.0, I can't say the same for you.
Sasha replying on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha 30 Sep 2004, 1:48 PM
They can. C.F. Shakespeare (sonnet 18, lines 13-14) "SO long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives grace to thee." Wilfred Owen, Anthom for Doomed youth (lines 13-14) "Their flowers the tenderness of patient minds, and each slow dusk a drawing-down of blinds." Or the last lines from a sonnet by Ronsard, Les amours de Marie, XIX: "Ça! Ça! que je baise et votre beau tétin Cent fois pour vois apprendre à vous lever matin." In short, even though your word is law and god where poetic forms are concerned, and even though you are exceedingly well informed on the topic and I clearly don't know anything at all about it, the last 2 lines can, and frequently do rhyme in a sonnet.
A Jew who was born on an easter sadly allergic to sheeps fur at the devil most true would simply AH-CHOO he passed as a nebbishing sneezer.
darylchew on Amputee by INTRANSIT 30 Sep 2004, 7:09 AM
..whaa.
INTRANSIT on Northern lights by Mr Pig 30 Sep 2004, 6:52 AM
kids with watercolors paint the smog.
INTRANSIT on Swedish Au Pair by scitz 30 Sep 2004, 6:51 AM
"but that's normal aint it, Norman?"
Caducus on Amputee by INTRANSIT 30 Sep 2004, 6:46 AM
you crack me up. i would give you my left and right arms if i could've wrote this.
maffy on A season of construction by fair12 30 Sep 2004, 5:26 AM
kind of dinged my dong :7
maffy on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha 30 Sep 2004, 5:25 AM
last 2 lines do not rhyme on a sonnet
maffy on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha 30 Sep 2004, 5:25 AM
good effort
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w on Northern lights by Mr Pig 30 Sep 2004, 4:35 AM
East of Aberdeen, from grey orb to pink hued sea man and God yogurt.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Put it away! by Special Needs 30 Sep 2004, 4:07 AM
Lactation is not a form of excretion. You should have written 'secrete' instead. For that, I'm appalled.
Prince of Void on peeper's envy by That One 29 Sep 2004, 11:20 PM
very good