Brandy_n_Cali
on crash&burn by AM I EVIL?
2 Sep 2004, 11:51 PM
I LIKE THIS POEM! THAT MAY SOUND A LITTLE MORBID SINCE THAT THE POEM IS ABOUT DEATH. BUT I DO, I REALLY LIKE IT!
why are there hardly ne coments or votes 2 night on the poems
A finely crafted foam...
i really like this peice... it puts me in a certain state of mind
That's a ridiculous generalization. Hey, I keep using that word. Maybe I should just use that word. Hey, thanks.
My feeling is that men are stupid and women are insane. Makes for a volatile combination. And, yes, I think bow'ls is perfect.
Now Dovina, the Poemeranker will not be held hostile. We're going to have to conduct a crusade.
So true.
a little too...I don't know...Hallmarky for me..
I need a strong word here to show his ridiculous disrespect. It’s amazing how much some women will put up with from a man and still give him another chance. Maybe something like bowl’s.
Like the feel and honesty - structure could be better.
-8.5-
klosterfobik
on Swimming in Space & Fishing for the Luridness Monster by SupremeDreamer
2 Sep 2004, 6:36 PM
Quite lame.
hogwash? really? For some reason, I tink that word takes away from it...but thats just me. The rest is good though.
She's young and don’t know nothing ‘bout life. A good He-done-her-wrong-song. But is crying bold? It seems more an escape from bold. The last verse - a nice switch.
very powerful, angry and straight to the point....
hope this is a prose poem as I'm green my friends so don't laugh at me if I'm completely wrong.
xxx
Works for me at this perfect moment.-10-
Not really....... just something I wanted to share with others.